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Out on the porch you are swingin'
Your daddy comes thru the back door
You don't hear the telephone ringin'
Your momma won't be back no more
Your daddy, he got the message
You jump down and run off to hide
Darlin' you know what's a comin'
Whiskey bottle at your side

It's hard for you to stop drinkin'
Mommy's not there any more
Your daddy is carryin' his shotgun
You just cannot take any more

Daddy is drunk and he beats you
The whiskey is takin' the sting
The bruises will show in the mornin'
You drink to forget everything

It's hard for you to stop drinkin'
When everything's gone to the wall
Your daddy has loaded the shotgun
Preparing himself for the fall
Come dawn, and everything's over
You and your daddy are dead
The whiskey has fired the shotgun
Your golden hair matted and red

Would it have been any different
If momma decided to stay
Yes it's hard for you to stop drinkin'
When you hated the taste anyway

leelee101

@leelee101

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Powerful write mate 😱😢

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Really powerful 😪💗

Sad 😪😪

@glen I've amended this one to include gold mate. For your consideration sir... 👍😉

Wow mate. That is one hell of a poem. Weirdly it's like the end to BB which I haven't wrote yet.

@glen ooo yes BB! Looking forward to that one! 👍😉

Brutal write my man 👏

@TheCodsPollocks the clue's in the title mate! 👍😉🍻

@oushie12 @PoppyA @Burrfoot appreciate your comments peeps thank u 👍❤

@smellyfingers mate it's a song. Came fully formed late this afternoon. I got it going kinda Dylan-ish 👍😉🎸🎤

@IndiaSparrow aw don't be sad sweetheart ❤😘

Amazing and very God Dylan-ish. Love it

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Great beat to this! 💚

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks, beautiful ❤ had a Dylan kinda tune in my head when a key line formed. Yup it's a song and I fully intend to chord it up today 👍❤😘

@naaviie thanks hun 👍❤

@RichWithey glad you liked it sir, thank you 👍😊

@iPuss thanks for the RP hun ❤😘

@RichWithey cheers 🍻 for the RP sir 🌟

@Irrational_Kimmi Kim thanks 🌹 for that RP sweetheart 👍❤😘

This is a strong and deeply sad write my sweet...the desperation just oozed out of this brilliant write😘😘😘😘

Definitely has a Dylan feel about it. Tough, sad and pulls no punches. 👍❤

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim 👍❤😘😘

@jojo72 yup it's a song jojo and I definitely had Dylan in mind. 'its hard for you to stop drinking' was the line that just popped on there, off I went... 👍❤😘

@leelee101 it's brilliant! You do Dylan proud. 😍

@jojo72 aw thanks hunny appreciate that👍❤😘

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