Would you destroy something perfect to make it beautiful? Watch it fall apart at the seams only to be repaired in an unorthodox manor. Watch it bleed and watch it suffer only to be stitched back better than ever. Would you dance on the edge of darkness only to be pulled further into the light? It's all a risk, are you willing to take it?
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Comments & Feedback (15)
@fadingfatality no thank you for sharing. Mind if I ask you a few questions on this piece or would you rather leave it open to interpretation?
If something is perfect than how do you make it beautiful? Wouldn't perfection = beauty? I think I know why you wrote it that way......just wanted to hear your thoughts, if that's ok?
@smellyfingers well not all the time. I looked at it in A different way. Take a box for example. It's the same on all side no dents or anything. It's perfect. But that box is so plain. Kick it put some holes in it. Give it character make it beautiful. I think perfection and beauty are two completely different things.
Enjoyed, nice piece. Now, just my thought about, don't you agree that, when you transform or change something or someone so profoundly , that that thing or that being are not the same anymore,
@lisa47 I've been writing like this for years. I guess I just don't look at what others do more of what's behind it all. Rather than looking at something I look at the emotion surrounding it. And I've been surrounded with sadness for quite some time
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