So full of love so empty of receipt
I don't get it back,why the deceit
You don't understand this loving man
I give my all and be the best I can
My love and care you don't deserve
I have given my all with no reserve
You'll know what you've lost
And you'll realise the cost
Cause I'm so very much more
When you explore me to my core
I'm fed up trying to be somebody I'm not
I am me,exciting,sexy and hot!
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Comments & Feedback (51)
@eddie12309 too late I'm afraid,making plans for my future,alone! 17 years is a shame though but it's time,thankyou 😘
@chy thankyou,that means a lot,I may not believe in god but I do believe in positive thinking,so prayers may work! Hope your feeling ok 😘😘
@gazplend great write mate. Opening salvo is really good. Tough times, mate. Stay strong, pull thru 👍😉
@gazplend I'm okay, still bouncing back and so will you sending lots of positive thoughts hugs and 😚😚 hope it all starts to feel better soon.
It'll be a rollercoaster but you'll get through it. Lots of positives to be gained, despite the heartbreak. The world, as they say, is your oyster😌😘
17 years, wow. No one can say you didn't hang in there. Best to you. You'll find someone who deserves you 😘
This is an open wound kinda write...here's a shot to cure heartache💉💉💉....a big virtual hug and a 👙👙....just thought that might cheer you up😃
@misslittleDHP ooh I do love your bikini! Thankyou,so much attention! I need to do more of these type of poems!! 😊😘
@misslittleDHP I certainly am! Wait till I do my saucy post in a bit! You'll be eating out my hand! 😘😘
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