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Heartbreaker (Part1)

Chapter 1

"Hannah,"yelled mum, "you'll be late for school.
"I'm coming!"she yelled back. Hannah was a 17 year old girl with friendly deep blue eyes and charming smile. She had a freckly nose,shoulder length brown hair with blonde highlights and a fringe that covered half her right eye. Off she went to school Hannah loved it but not because of the lessons,but because of her BF,Jake.

Chapter 2

When she got to school Hannah started passing out party invites to her graduation party. Stanford University is where Hannah Louise Taylor is going collage. When she saw Jake she said,"You are coming. Arn't you?"
"Of cause I am!",he replied.
All through the week all Hannah could think of was her party. It was going to be brilliant dancing, chatting,romance. Hannah was a big girly girl.

Chapter 3

Finally, the night had arrived. Everything seemed to be in order, snacks,drinks and music. DING! DONG! The first person is here. She opened the door,
"Jake!"she exclaimed,"Come in,come in."
More and more people arrived and it was an hour into the party when the heartbreak happened...

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That story is awesome!!!!I love it cos: 1. I am in it and 2. You have created such a scene!!

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