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A Mortal Blow

It taps into my very core
Then leaks from every darkened pore
Infects, controls, hotwires my brain
Leaves me with the deepest stain
Once in, it's very hard to move
Inverted smile that won't improve
Rhythms regularly repeated
I try to break, remain defeated
Seamless black as endless night
Extinguishes creative light
Routine, be bested by fortune
I'll cast the mortal blow quite soon...

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Love this, especially the line seamless black as endless night!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜β€πŸΊ

@sammielee46 aw cheers Sam, appreciate that hunny. πŸ‘ Just got a bit bored, is all 😒 Thanks for the RP sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly thanks for the RP MM πŸ‘ and may I say that's a lovely new pic hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 awww thanks lee 😘😘 and I enjoyed reading this one!

@jackalice thanks for the RP fella πŸ‘πŸ»

@minxyMolly glad to hear it sweety, thanks! ❀❀❀

Awww why the upside down smile?

@sarahgamal nothing hun, just got a bit bored is all. πŸ‘ And anyway you've made it go the right way up 😊😊😊 see? ❀ Thanks for the RP hun πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 😊😊 😘

πŸ˜” sad poem but excellent writing ☺

@insomnium aw cheers J (I'm gonna call you J if that's ok) πŸ‘ appreciate that hun ❀

@chickgamer @Irrational_Kimmi thanks for reposting my lovelies πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 sure, I'm also known as Raven :)

@insomnium πŸ‘πŸ‘β€

@misslittleDHP thanks for repostingy sweet

@misslittleDHP thanks for reposting my sweet πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

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