Angel Of Earth

leelee101 • 1434 followers

'Fellow, I've not come to save
Rather to see how man behaves
It comes to this, they'd kill a king
They're capable, then, of anything'
The cursed man died that very day
And the angel moved upon her way

Through the years the green and blue
Yielded to a darkness new
Religion and war fell hand in hand
Wherever she walked, in every land
Through the very worst and best
Mankind failed at every test
Twice the world fell into war
Revelation of our fatal flaw
She watched as, rising from the ashes
We survived ourselves, atomic flashes
She saw an uneasy quiet descend
Man kills brother until the end
But still she walks amid plain sight
She knows one day things will go right
For her eternal mission upon the Earth
One day will end with mans rebirth...

#adventchallenge #apocalyptic #existential #general #philosophical #poetry #supernatural

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Comments & Feedback (45)

Dec 28, 2012 at 5:20 AM

Amazing. 👏👏👏👏

Dec 28, 2012 at 6:30 AM

Very, very impressive. The best work I have read of yours - thanks for this, what an inspirational piece to read at 6.30 in the morning!

Dec 28, 2012 at 6:38 AM

Nice! 😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 7:20 AM

Beautiful lee, very well written! ✨🍺🍺✨🍺🍺✨

Dec 28, 2012 at 7:31 AM

My my. What a cracker to read this morning. 👏👏👏☕

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:11 AM

@eddie12309 thanks hun, appreciate that. ❤ And of course ☕🌹 Morning

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:12 AM

@eddie12309 thanks hun, appreciate that. ❤ And of course, ☕™👍🌹😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:13 AM

@rhona thanks hunny 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:17 AM

@ckahn thanks kristina ❤ and thanks for the RP too hun 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:18 AM

@jackalice wow thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it. 👍 Thanks for the RP too 🍻🍻

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:20 AM

@Jamtots thanks very much Jam. Appreciate that, and the RP. 👍🍻🍻👏

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:22 AM

@leelee101 wow I agree with the others lee this is on a whole new level well done👏👏👏😊❤

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:27 AM

@tetti2 thank u very much hun, appreciate that, glad you all enjoyed it. ❤ And thanks for reposting Terri xxx

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:33 AM

Fab stuff, what a message 💚

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:40 AM

@naaviie thank u Nic and thank you for reposting too hunny. ❤ How's it going? 👍😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 8:56 AM

Really love this Lee👏👏👏👏😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 9:07 AM

@sarahgamal thank u Sarah, appreciate that hunny. 👍 Thank you for reposting ❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 9:48 AM

Superb my sweet...wonderfully written ❤👼❤👼❤👼❤👼❤

Dec 28, 2012 at 9:52 AM

@Irrational_Kimmi @MrsS

Dec 28, 2012 at 9:53 AM

@misslittleDHP aw thank you Kim. 👍❤ Appreciate that RP my lovely 😘😘😘🌹

Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 28, 2012 at 9:55 AM

Epic @leelee101 truly epic and perfect!

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM

I think Kim said it all, truly epic! Well done you 👏👏👏👏💜

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:30 AM

Love love love this 😍😍😍😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:54 AM

@sjw thanks sienna ❤ and for the RP hunny 👍😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:54 AM

@Stablish thanks for reposting bro 👍🍻

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:56 AM

@carolsgregory aw thanks carol 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 11:56 AM

@Irrational_Kimmi thank u hunnybunch™ appreciate that. ❤ And thanks for reposting sweety 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 1:44 PM

@carolsgregory thanks for the RP hun 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Awesome poem mate 👏🚶👏🏃👏🚶💨

Dec 28, 2012 at 2:37 PM

@glen cheers mate nice one. 👍🍻 thanks for the RP sir 👏🍻

TheCodsPollocks

Dec 28, 2012 at 3:12 PM

I don't think you've done better than this mate - and that's saying something. I think the only way we will change is if evolution takes a hand in say, a couple of hundred million years, and somehow frees us from the "anger/hate" gene. Brilliant piece mate. 👍😢

Dec 28, 2012 at 3:29 PM

This is superb!

Dec 28, 2012 at 4:13 PM

@paintingskies thank you, appreciate that 👍❤

Dec 28, 2012 at 4:15 PM

@TheCodsPollocks thank you Jimmy, appreciate that. 👍 I don't think we will ever change. We're hardwired now, capable of such greatness, yet capable of such stunning depravity. 😢 Thanks for reposting mate 👍👏🍻🍻

Dec 28, 2012 at 6:50 PM

Incredibly brilliant!! ✨🌟😄💛

Dec 28, 2012 at 7:33 PM

@blacknova thanks Lucy, appreciate that. ❤Thanks for reposting too Lucy 👍😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 7:33 PM

@minxyMolly thanks for reposting sweety 👍❤😘

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:49 PM

I LOV this !!!

Dec 28, 2012 at 10:52 PM

@elliebellie thank you very much. 👍

Dec 29, 2012 at 12:25 AM

Wow!! You just get better and better! How do you do it?? ✨🌟💘🌟

Dec 29, 2012 at 12:28 AM

@sleepydragon that's kind Diana thank you. It just came to me this morning. 👍 Thanks for reposting hun ❤🌹

Dec 29, 2012 at 12:49 AM

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Dec 29, 2012 at 12:51 AM

@RichWithey thanks very much hombre 👍 appreciate that RP too sir 👍👏🍻

Dec 29, 2012 at 1:53 AM

Watched the news this evening for the first time in a while - ugh!!! Remembered why I started turning over when it came on. Crazy, crazy world.... 😳😔

Dec 29, 2012 at 7:07 AM

@MrsS ain't it just. 😢 Thanks hun, and thanks for the RP too 👍❤🌹

Jan 1, 2013 at 11:43 PM

@AlisaPerne thanks for the kind RP ❤ much appreciated 👍👏

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