i follow you i'm always there
i'm attracted by the scent you wear
the clothes that make you look so pretty
some colour in this soulless city
your hair that bounces when you walk
the way you smile the way you talk
don't turn around you'll never know
where i am how far i'll go
i want you sweetheart in my plan
i'm nothing special i'm just a man
maybe in a different time
i'd be lucky call you mine
but for now my shiny knife
tells me i should take
your
life
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I was preparing to write warm and sweet comments for your sweet poem until the last line floored me π I really need to take more interest in the competitions you all do so that I am mentally prepared! It is a great poem though and if I am honest, I actually like the ending! π±π±π±πΉ
@crowncottage haha! Weren't expecting that ending then Linda? You must have know something was up with the lack of capitals... Glad you liked it tho. You should enter! πβ€π
@Irrational_Kimmi aw baby! Sorry Kim, just what came into my mind. It's a nasty place sometimes... Mwahahaha! ππβ€π
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