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Falling

It wasn't meant to be this way
To fall for someone new
Especially as his marriage
Showed no sign of falling thru
But every time he saw her
All reason ran away
He kinda got to thinking
He must have her, now, today!
But then the realisation
And it cut him like a knife
Could he really do it?
To his loyal, loving wife
He cut a rueful figure
But this home lark weren't so bad
Gave photo girl the title
'The Best He'd Never Had'

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Fabulous...loved the last line...the best he'd never had...genius💚❤💚❤

@misslittleDHP thanks Kim! Do none of us ever sleep? 👍😉😘

Yes agree with@misslittleDHP last line does it. 💚

@leelee101 ha ha...went to bed at 11 and up at 6... Which is early for me...hope to get a lie in 2moz...💤💤

Disappointing errors like Thru but otherwise good ;)

Lovely!! Still got the itch then? 😄😄

Great poem, don't get me started on sleep lol💤💤

@Stablish cheerzzzz bro 😉

@crowncottage haha! No nothing like it Linda! Just seem to be on a 'love lost' kinda theme 👍😘

@eddie12309 thank u hunny 👍😘

@OdinsFist thank u. Poetic license, nothing like it! 👍😊

And conversely (courtesy of Beyonce-not me) you could argue you're the 'Best Thing She'll NEVER have' ! Great piece & probable touches a nerve with a few😉😘

Very sweet 💞

@Fly10 very kind words Leigh, thank u. 👍😘❤

@sjw thank u sienna 👍😘

@leelee101 love your words 💗 very sweet it is a shame when some do stray 😔 once again fab work ☺

@minxyMolly thank u 👍😘

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