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Pit Of Betrayal

Within the depths of her
She knew this was very wrong
However the power to resist him
Had truly all but gone

Their fingertips touched
Brushing gently across the table
It sent shivers down her spine
To not want him she was unable

With each smouldering look
They looked deep into their soul
Into a divine place they fell
In reality it was betrayals hole

The passion took over from what's right
All common sense left the room
Together in the fog of betrayal
They are sealing each others doom

But just for now they want to forget
Only wanting what is here and now
They cavort inside the deep lustful pit
Hoping they can get out someday, somehow

©Kim Brown 28th August 2012

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Oooooo excellent write 👫😜

Ooooh I like 👏 ❤😘

@sara_lou....thanking you very muchly my sweet for the RP🌹

@glen @sjw thanks you gorgeous peeps and a big huggie for the reposts AND a late night tipple 🍸🍺🍻🍸

@misslittleDHP welcome Hun 😘💜

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That was real nice - a good read. Please forgive my ignorance here, but why is your stuff copyrighted? Are you a publisher author (I nearly wrote Arthur!!!)?

Betrayal is fun when you're the betrayer, eh? Good one!

Oooo the forbidden fruit.... Lovely stuff Kim 🍎🍊🍉🍓🍆❌👏❤👍😘

Temptation. Ooooh! I love it😘

@merlin1038 @leelee101 @VikingHorn @RichWithey thanking you all you gorgeous peeps😘😘😘😘😘😘

@yowwa some of my favourite pieces I copyright just to give myself extra protection against it being copied....I wish I was a published author but alas I'm not....I've always dated all my old work and on here I stopped doing it for some reason but I have now started again😘😘😘😘

@sarahgamal...mwah my sweet for the kind repost 😘😘😘😘

@leelee101 @VikingHorn @ckahn....mwah all of you for the RP 😍😘

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