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Betrayed

From the start I catered for your every whim
Stroked your hair while you dreamt of him

Every night I watched you as you slept
Laid your head on my chest as you secretly wept

All my ambitions in life revolved around you
Plans laid out, heart laid bare for a fantasy that only you knew

Yesterday you showed me the little blue line
For twenty four hours I was on cloud nine

Today after work I came home to an empty house
Flowers and ring to surprise you and seek your hand as my spouse

A note on the kitchen table sealed with a kiss
Our past, present and future thrown into the abyss

The life we shared, the life you grow all a lie
Both belong to another and the letter was your goodbye

If you read my words know that I wish you and baby well
Im already dead but now it's time to leave this broken shell

Burrfoot

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Comments & Feedback (18)

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Setting a high bar out of the gate! I like it!

@RichWithey @VikingHorn πŸ˜₯πŸ˜‰ cheers peeps πŸ‘

Sad 😒😒😒 well written πŸ‘πŸ‘

Superb πŸ˜’πŸ‘

@sarahgamal @leelee101 merci buckets πŸ‘

πŸ˜’πŸ’™ sad but beautifully done πŸ’‹

Great work

@Burrfoot absolutely stunning...very sad but an amazing write πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

Excellent πŸ˜ƒ

Oh dear! 😿

Very,very good. πŸ‘

A truly heartbreaking but superb write....you conveyed the betrayal brilliantly...really felt this one πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”

Poignant as always my friend - keep healing brotherπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ

@Irrational_Kimmi @pthasse @oushie12 @glen ta very muckle πŸ‘

@TheCodsPollocks @misslittleDHP πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„ 🍻

@merlin1038 onwards 🍻

This is great, love how it was written :)

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