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First To Nowhere

Once upon a memory
A time and place so long ago
There was you and there was me
And a third I didn't know

As we grew the third came with us
He had been there from the start
Although you said you loved me
It was the other that held your heart

Empty answerphone messages
The number always withheld
And the occasional letter
Your name always strangely spelled

You became ever distant
Resistant to my touch
And then, with tears, the truth
I should have guessed as much

A conversation overheard
It was no-one, you would swear
But he's come from third to first
And me first to nowhere

You were all I ever wanted
But I had to let you go
Give me one last moment
Just to let you know

I want you more than need you
And I want you for all time
But I love you so I've freed you
For I know you'll never be mine...

2 lines from 'Witchita Lineman' by Glen Campbell

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Comments & Feedback (40)

This is really beautiful. Which lines were borrowed? They obviously blended well. Loved it!!

πŸ’” I know it's fictional (I think) but πŸ’” great write Lee πŸ‘πŸ‘

Aww brilliant stuff 😭😘❀

@Delilah aww back at'cha D ❀ Thanks hun and for the RP too 😘😘

@wolfcharmer_ appreciate the RP hun πŸ‘ thank you ❀

@sarahgamal it is fiction Sarah and thank you. πŸ‘ Big valentines πŸ’‹ smacker for the RP hun 😘😘

@pennygirl21 aw thanks hun. πŸ‘ It's the penultimate two lines, I've wanted to use them for ages! πŸ‘ Thanks for the kind RP too 😘😘

Cleverly written -simplicity at it's best. 🌟☺✨

Beautifully expressed the love and sadness

Bittersweet. πŸ˜”πŸ˜”β˜•morning

@eddie12309 cheers hun, morning β˜• Valentines smacker πŸ’‹ for you πŸ‘

@rhona a Valentines smacker πŸ’‹ for the RP hun πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@chickgamer appreciate that LJ, thank you πŸ’‹ a valentines smacker for the RP too πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@BethyBoo πŸ’‹ a smackeroo for the RP hun thank you πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@yikici thank you. ❀ Simple is often the best way I find. πŸ‘ Thanks for the RP too 😘😘

You are choosing some great lines to include in some great posts today! ☺

πŸ‘πŸ‘ quality πŸ‘πŸ‘

@sammielee46 a valentines smacker πŸ’‹ for the RP hunny thank you πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Burrfoot thank you sir. πŸ‘ And for the RP too. Nice soppy day lined up TeddyBurrβ„’? ❀❀

@crowncottage I appreciate that Linda, thank you. Always loved that song, and it came on in the car last night. I thought, I know... πŸ‘ Thanks for reposting my lovely πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 aye... She away to butcher to get my breakfast while I watch telly in bed πŸ‘πŸ˜„

I certainly agree.✨

@Burrfoot Class. πŸ‘ Here have some β˜• to go with your brekkie mate πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Burrfoot I'm actually jealous. Could have done with staying in bed today πŸ˜‚

@leelee101 I'm back shift so start at 3... I spoil her the rest of the year so I'm getting the treatment today πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚

@Burrfoot ahh sweet... Lap it up mate πŸ‘πŸ‘

Awww beautiful love this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw thank you Sie, appreciate that hun. πŸ‘β€ A valentines smacker πŸ’‹ to go with your rose for the RP too 😘😘

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@RichWithey ahh nice one Rich, appreciate that hombre. πŸ‘πŸ‘ Line 'em up, barkeep! 🍻🍻🍻

@j4evr21a appreciate the lovely RP hun πŸ‘ thank you 😘

@Irrational_Kimmi appreciate the lovely RP sweetheart πŸ‘β€ thank you 😘

@naaviie thanks for the lovely RP Nic πŸ‘β€ Loads of cards today? 😘

@Miiinty appreciate that sweet RP hun πŸ‘β€ thank you 😘

Oh my...πŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺ.....superb piece my sweet πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Just wonderful Lee. And I love a bit of The Rhinestone Cowboy 😌😘

@LiSaC64 thanks for the lovely RP Lisa πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜πŸŒΉ

@misslittleDHP Kim thank you very much, and big πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹ for the RP. Sorry your phones going nuts again! πŸ˜‚πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 aw thanks m'lady and Happy Valentines Day to you. ❀ I've been meaning to use those lines for ages and this was my chance! πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thanks for the kind RP Leigh 😘😘🌹

@nikujagagirl thanks for the kind RP hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 You're welcome!

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