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BRO/KEN

Couldn't believe what my eyes saw
You were supposed to be mine
Saying you'd be with me until the end of time.

I gave you my heart
Now you've torn it painfully apart
What about our life, our plans, us..
You said I was yours, your own love rush.

You cut me so deep,
leaving me stone cold and weak.
Ill never get the image from my head
the day I found you with her, in our own bed.

sjw

@sjw

Opuss has given me a love of words and writing...

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Comments & Feedback (21)

Ouch.....hope that's not true Hun ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

@Wolfie @secret ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

Shock indeed! Nice writing! ๐Ÿ‘

@misslittleDHP no purely fictional thankfully! Thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’

@secret thank you! I like your choice of word ๐Ÿ˜Š and thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ’

@sjw Pleasure and thanks :)

Glad it's fiction. Was going to paste him for you :/)

Great write young 'un! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

@sjw wow! Very good darling,hard hitting ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜˜โคx

@wolfie I'd paste him myself if it wasn't but thanks I know where to come if needed lol ๐Ÿ˜˜

@TheCodsPollocks young un..yesterday it was kiddo! I like it hope your still around when I'm 50! Lol thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿป

@gazplend thank you! And hugs for the RP hunni ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿœ๐ŸŽ‚ I bet you've not eaten yet these should keep you going ๐Ÿ˜˜x

What! Another 34years? I doubt it! โœจ๐Ÿ˜€

@TheCodsPollocks haha you flatterer! ๐Ÿ˜˜

๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

I could love you if you let me

Love is my name I'm glad you met me

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@alcindorpoetry are you for real?? Wtf!!

Awesome display of emotion! Kudos! ๐Ÿ‘

@Zhana thank you that's a lovely comment ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’

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