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Taken

Take a bright but lonely star and put it gently in your pocket
Take a piece of clear blue sky and keep it safe within a locket
Take a freshly broken heart, gather its pieces, make them warm
And glue them back together with the magic you perform

Take emotions from the oceans, spread their fragrance everywhere
Take the essence of commotion, simply remove it from the air
Take a soul that had been splintered, softly kiss away its pain
And cradle it so tenderly until it's whole again

Take a little piece of day and a little piece of night
Take the time you need to fuse them into beautiful twilight
Take a raging furious tempest, help it breathe calmly once more
And then take the wind of change and make it show us what it's for

Take the newly minted moon and upon it plant your love
Take me to the heavens, we'll watch it grow from high above
Take every dream and wish, you seem to make them all come true
And even if you can't, all that I'll ever need is you

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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In love with this. πŸ˜πŸ‘

Complete gorgeousness πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly appreciate your kind RP MM ❀ thanks sweety 😘😘

@sjw ahh glad you think so hun, thank you. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜ Big πŸ’‹ smacker for the rp Sie πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

@paintingskies aw that's lovely hunny thank you. πŸ‘β€ And thanks for reposting too 😘😘

@blackfaerie73 appreciate the RP πŸ‘ thank you. ❀❀

@patdolan83 thanks for that RP Pat πŸ‘ cheers 🍻

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@sarahgamal aw bless you. 😘 Thanks for reposting Sarah πŸ‘πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

Awwww -I mean awwwww this is so warm and fuzzy and yummy. ☺ Really really REALLY love this, a fab-tastic write. πŸ’πŸ˜˜πŸ’—βœ¨

@yikici awww thanks hunny, I was temporarily taken over by the fuzzy monsters. Must be the heat... πŸ˜‚ Normal service will be resumed soon, I'm sure! πŸ˜‚ Glad you like it sweety and thanks for reposting πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 'tis a brilliant write, you should compile these poems somewhere far more accessible than Opuss -maybe you already do? It'll just be a huge shame to get lost and not savoured by other readers & lovers of poetry. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

@yikici cheers hun πŸ‘ been in touch with a publisher on and off, waiting to hear from them now actually, but it's a slow process. To be honest I'm just enjoying it here, but I do have a piece in print, so I wait patiently to hear from them, but I won't hold my breath. I pop one on FB and YouTube now and again. We'll see. ❀😘

@leelee101 I hear ya. Have you considered looking into poetry societies & clubs etc -apparently poetry recitals gets a huge interest from agents & publishers. 😘✨

@yikici no hun, I don't have the time. I know it seems I have all the time in the world, but I'm lucky in so much as my job gives me my writing time. Home life takes everything else. And precedent of course. But thank you, I'll keep one eye open, it's a possibility isn't it? πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 yup, it's something to consider. I'm just looking into it, got a book on what's the best route for poets & writers, so it's becoming a fascinating read... And by all means I do not think you have all the time in the world, that didn't even cross my mind. Just thought you could utilise the talent you have that's all. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

@yikici I'll give it a shot at some point hun, just need a good kick in the ass most times! πŸ˜‚ Appreciate the support hun, thank you. 😘😘😘

Beautiful πŸ’‹β€β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜˜

@LiSaC64 aw Lisa thank you. ❀ A touch of the afternoon soppies 😘😘

Lovely. β˜•Afternoon.

@eddie12309 afternoon hun. Thank you and β˜•β„’πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

Shit hot poem mate β˜•β˜•β˜•β˜•πŸ‘πŸ‘

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@RichWithey thanks amigo πŸ‘πŸ‘ the chalice of amber for the RP mate πŸ»πŸ‘

@glen oo thanks mate! And cheers for reposting too, nice one πŸ‘πŸ»

@misslittleDHP appreciate the RP Kim my lovely ❀❀

@sammielee46 thanks for the RP sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 gosh! Just come across this one! Gosh! Oo better add an emo now I've found them!😊😊πŸ’₯πŸ‘πŸŒ 

@wendy3763 is gosh good hun? I hope so! πŸ˜‚ Thanks for the lovely RP πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Gosh is very good!😊

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