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The Sound of Heartbreak

What's the sound of heartbreak?
Is it quiet or is it loud?
Does your percussionist vacate
When no further love's allowed?

Is it like the final whistle
That signifies the game is done
Is it the rattle of an engine
That upon empty used to run

Does it rip or tear like paper
Does it go out with a bang
Do your rubber banded heartstrings
Give an auditory twang

Is there yet an echo
Of a heartbeat's fall from grace
Does it need to make a noise
When it's written on your face

Or is there just a silence
As your pride begins to fall
The truth about a heartbreak
Is that it makes no sound at all...

leelee101

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Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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@RichWithey bloody hell that was quick! πŸ˜‚ Only just put that up amigo! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Cheers Rich, repost beers for you of course πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»πŸ»

@BethyBoo thank you for the kind RP Beth πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Fab piece Hun love it!! :)

@sammielee46 aw thanks Sam appreciate that hun. ❀ Big πŸ’‹ for the RP too πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

@leelee101 my pleasure honey :)

❀ Sad but beautiful piece lee love it!

Awesome lots of really great lines in this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw thanks Sie, appreciate that. πŸ’‹πŸ’‹ for the RP hunny πŸ‘πŸŒΉπŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly why thank u very much MM. ❀ Appreciate that kind RP hun πŸ‘πŸŒΉπŸ˜˜

Sad Lee πŸ˜’πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@sarahgamal yea... 😒 Thanks for the RP Sarah πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

This makes me sad 😒 but I do like it 😊

Wow...a wonderful, beautiful piece Hun ...I wish I could like it ten times...stunning πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’›πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’›πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’›πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’›πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’›πŸ‘

@rhona and I'm glad you do sweety. ❀Thanks for reposting Rhona πŸ‘πŸŒΉπŸ’‹

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim, I appreciate that. ❀ Lots of late night πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ for the RP my lovely πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@leelee101 my pleasure Hun, such a gorgeous write...huggies before bed πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ😘😘

@misslittleDHP gratefully received my sweet πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

Great one Lee, well done! ☺😽

@Jamtots thanks for reposting sir πŸ‘πŸ»

@crowncottage thanks Linda ❀ a big Xmas πŸ’‹ for the RP πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

πŸ’” Beautiful.

@blingey123 thank u. πŸ‘β€

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