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Oh little snail upon the tree
We've been here before
I've told you time and time again
You're safer on the floor
Oh little snail, you daredevil
What are you doing there
You look lifeless, motionless
Suspended in mid-air
The little snail then said to me
Oh no, not you again
I started climbing up this tree
Last night at half past ten
So if you would be good enough
To kindly leave me be
I may ascend an inch or two
By about half past three
Oh little snail, courageous
My cap to you, I'll doff
If he's not there at lunchtime
I'll know he's fallen off

leelee101

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Ah little snails. They seem to enjoy chilling on paths too. Little daredevils 😊

@Mundy gotta love 'em! Thanks ❀ for that RP πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Awe! He'll be fine! 😊

@naaviie he's still there so I guess he's happy! He says thanks for the RP πŸ‘β€πŸ˜‚πŸŒ΄

Please leave him on the tree, his friends are in my garden eating the Hostas! πŸ™Ž

@crowncottage haha! Pssst...oi, snail, you'll never guess where your mates are...! πŸ‘β€πŸ˜‚

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@leelee101 don't you dare draw him a map! πŸ˜‰

@RichWithey cheers man! And the snail says cheers for the RP πŸ‘πŸ˜‚

@crowncottage Pssst! Oi snail, you'll never guess what I've got for you... πŸ‘β€πŸ˜‚

Brilliant...I'm one of these peeps who gets around picking up snails so that they don't get tread on...how sad am I ??...🐚🐚🐚

Classic and wonderful, well doneπŸ‘

@misslittleDHP as long as you don't put the poor sods on the trees... 🌴🐚 cheers Kim! πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@merlin1038 aw thank u. And πŸ‘πŸŒŸ for that RP too ❀

@misslittleDHP thank u for the RP Kim πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

So funny! :D

@jojo72 morning jojo! Thank u hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

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