The one where your heart is aching and your eyes become red from tears.
The one where you just need a hug
The one where you have to bit your lip to keep quite.
The one where you feel you can't breath anymore
The one when you try to accept the person that meant the most to you, is gone
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I agree with @Burrfoot ☺💪💪💪 In the seventh line, it says 'the one where feel you' instead of 'you feel'. I love this ❤😘
Mrs Mary I'm afraid if I'm the only one to tell you but acrostic poetry is where each new line starts with a letter that forms a word or words on the vertical left hand side of the page. Please see my last post for inspiration 😉
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