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Improv challenge set by @Thebeautifulundead

Warning 18+

On the 10 O'clock news her crime was heard
Her memory of it all was hazy and blurred
All she knew was that it had been 6 long years
Of hurt and pain and cruelty and fears
She loved him so but he only showed hate
His passion for perversion kept her awake
How could she get love so very wrong?
His perverse persuasion over her was strong
When he had ideas to hurt that of a child
A switch within her flipped and went wild
Hurting her she had accepted many years ago
Him wanting a child now, his perversion had grown
So on the day he shared his perverse thoughts
She knew her life with him had ran its course
Whilst he was asleep she got his baseball bat
Looked at the sleeping monster......WHACK
The thuds were deep and the cracks so loud
Blood splattered everywhere, on walls and ground
Exhausted she stood back at the end of the bed
Looked at the mass of flesh that was once his head
She felt better now, she could breathe, she felt at peace
She calmly went downstairs, picked up the phone to call the police

misslittleDHP

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Grim, but very well written :)

@TommyWalsh was a bit...I might not sleep tonight...thanks for the repost my lovely:):)

Sadly, this is prob quite accurate in certain casesπŸ˜” Excellent writing 😘

@Fly10 as I was writing this I thought this very thought could be crossing a persons mind who is in a terrorising relationship or one that is just wrong on so many levels...makes me realise how lucky I am to have a man who loves me xxxx

Exactly-makes the loo seat up, farting, quilt stealing etc seem all ok doesn't it? Well, for a day or two at least...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 ha a ha...very true!!

@misslittleDHP excellent Kim. Really good write πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 thanks my sweet and mwah for the repost xxx

Very well written Kim πŸ‘

@Earthbound thanks for the repost my sweet xx

@smellyfingers thanks Hun and thanks for the repost mwah x

@misslittleDHP You're welcome. :)

Hey my lovely. In case you hadn't already clocked it, our previous plagairist no.1 is on here again in the form of Living Dead. I've had my suspicions for a while(as have others) as writing style etc so similar. Check out her post 'Not My God' against 'Heaven Shunned' on Deep Underground poetry site. She mixes & matches pieces from here, which is exactly what she did before, using the same site. I've raised

I'll report it fully together with my other findings on Monday/Tuesday when I've got full wifi etc access. Just wrong that people are being fooled agains & as I said previously, I ABHOR deceit 😠

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