Who I'll never forget
5 years ago
A double blow
Mum and dad split
By sadness I was hit
The security I had
Was gone, it's bad
4 years ago
My boyfriend said no
A leap year, so I proposed
My sadness just grows
3 years ago
I'm a person I don't know
The madness crept in
How did this begin?
2 years ago
The therapists know
That I'm not safe
My mind misbehaves
I've tried to trace my past
Why has this spell been cast?
1 year ago
My tears still flow
I want to be well
Released from my minds hell
I've thought long and hard
Remember reading a card
Placed it up my shelf
The mirror smashed, oh hell
I brushed away the shards
Next day, dad bought my car
Went out in a dash
That's when I had the crash
I've had 7 years of rot
Because of that mirror I dropped!!
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
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Comments & Feedback (30)
Ohhh😢I was in a bad crash 2 years ago mothers day and got panic attacks while driving. 'ol noggin is still not right. Memory not what it was. I'm glad you walked away but understand how the after effects can so impact your life.
I love this 😊 here's some good luck for you 🍀🍀🍀 I think #household should be ditched now in favour of #mirrors
You lived through seven years of utter misery? I'm so sorry about that. Now I feel like a coward for barely making it through two years of misery. You're so brave!!!
@RichWithey I never knew that!!...I wish I had....some aspects of this post were true but not all...and I did break a mirror...how mortified was I ??😔😔😔😔
@nikujagagirl don't worry my sweet, I've had my fair share of misery but not all parts of the poem are true...the car crash and breaking the mirror were true but that's all...here's a 🌹🌹🌹🌹 for being so sweet and caring!!☺
@ckahn I did break a mirror and have a car crash...I wasn't driving an ex boyfriend was...but it was sooo spooky as I knew we were going to crash in that car....I was sooooo nervous for a year or so after...the crash could of been so much worse if the car had flipped...someone was looking after me that night!....the rest of the poem is made up...wow I'm amazed that people thought it was all real💙💜💙💜.....glad you are still here too my darling to inspire us with your words🌹🌹
@leelee101 hey my sweet...I'm not really that unlucky...had my fair share though😃😃😃...most of the poem was just my imagination running away with me....THANKYOU for liking though hun💚❤💚❤💚❤💚❤
@ckahn I do my sweet...I was told by a medium once that I was incredibly spiritual and could tap into it if I chose...I've written poems about the weird things that have happened to me...but yes my ex bought the car to show me, I sat in it and I just shuddered and went pale...he said what's wrong?....and I said we are going to crash in this car...two nights later we did...,I was 6 mths pregnant with my son as well ....whilst it happened I was sat there all calm, everyone was screaming but it was like I wasn't there and it was in slow mo...I knew I would be ok though....quite surreal really!😱
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