Six word challenge by @naaviie and spookily like the lovely @sjw's
The Dear John letter
Arrived on his mat
Leaving him feeling
Alone and flat
He felt like driftwood
Washed up on a shore
She wants out of his life
She can't take no more
When he looks in the mirror
He sees a face not right
A jigsaw missing a piece
All tense and uptight
The friction is there upon his face
So now it's all over
It's a release from this place!
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
I try to smile. And hide the fears inside. I have been trying to heal my heart. But it looks like it will take a while. I lie and say that I already let go.
you say I've changed, you don't like me this way, but I've been me all along, trying not to burst out, into a angry loud song, you say I've changed, I'm not like the old Katie, you say I've...
I have a little more time now, so I'm gonna write this down. As I said earlier, I explored myself a little today. The first thing you should know is I'm majorly hung up on my last ex.
I want to talk, but who to talk to. In here there is no one what should I do. The mistake it is in my mind. I want to forget it I want it to hide.
Let it be Chains were binding me Holding me back I remember what you said One day love will find you Break those chains that bind you I believe that's still true But you were my love I gave you...
You can't fix me if I'm not broken. Everything has already been taken. You need to let me be I can't stay here so unhappy. I need to be left alone. Where I can be set free to roam.
Getting over you. was the hardest thing. I've ever had to do. The tears I cried. The fears I still hide. All because I wanted you by my side. You said it could never work.
What are you here for. Can't you see. There is the door. You made me see. That you are wrong for me. You broke my heart. And thanks to you we will be apart. Just get out. I don't want to shout.
OMG! It's like the flip coin of mine! We're obviously on the same wave length! Like it a lot πββπ»π»π»
@sjw I know...lol....it was my brothers birthday today so he has been up most of the day, so I have been slowly managing to read through everyone's posts ...some fab writes today...ππ
@misslittleDHP happy birthday brotherπ there has been some good stuff today it's true, and your welcome hun π½
@naaviie it is...I was a tad embarrassed to put it up as it was sooo alike but great minds think alike and all that ...lol
@naaviie isn't it! I told think we could've done better if we had planned to write both sides of the coin lol π
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