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We're Not Quite There

Torn between two worlds
We remain apart
No relationship for us to build
No end no start
As I carry on each day
With you in my mind
I keep asking myself
Why is fate so very unkind?
I try to forget you
Act as though I don't care
But it hurts so bad
It's so hard to bear
For you have someone else
Whom you love far more
Yet you want me too
Why, how and what for?
Feelings cannot say
What I'm feeling now inside
My dignity still stands
And I still have my dear pride
No longer can I go on
Feeling how I do
Not knowing what you want
Whether what I need is you?
Like a dying star
I'm drifting alone somewhere
As for me and you
We're not quite there

©Kim Brown 29th August 2012
First written May 1991

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (19)

Aw. Sad but lovely too 👏👏👏😢❤

Lovely as always, hun 💚💚💚💙

Love it Hun 💗💞💗💞

@leelee101 @HeatherAnne @Livvi thanks you very lovely peeps😘😘😘

@naaviie...for the repost Hun I'm going to share my martini with you as I only share with gorgeous peeps🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸

@HeatherAnne a bunch of flowers for a gorgeous girlie and for the kind repost💐💐💐💐

@leelee101 a big smackeroo for the repost Hun 💋💋

@minxyMolly...a box of chocs for the kind repost my sweet 💝

@misslittleDHP aww it was no problem a martini in return 🍸😉😘

@misslittleDHP ooo I like a smackeroo! 👍❤❤

Woooo!!! 😍🍸🍸

@sjw....thanking you my sweet for the RP...🍸🌹🍸🌹

Very well expressed that most can relate too! Thank you!😘😉🎇

@michga Thanking you very muchly Hun ....I'm just so glad to have got over the chap I wrote this about...quite weird reading it back as I could feel the rawness of it all...but thankfully I moved on ....thanks Hun ❤❤❤❤

@michga a flower for the repost🌹🌹

@Azmeril...mwah my sweet for the repost😘😘😘😘

I hope you're alright! D':

@nikujagagirl I'm ok my sweet...no need to worry Hun 😘😘😘😘😘

@misslittleDHP That's good. :)

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