Max Barnes is Eva's ex and is a complete chav, they were together for about 4 weeks and he was really shy around her so Eva dumped him. "Urite lily, Eva?" Max muttered in his chavvy accent as he jumped onto the seat next to us. He winked at me and slowly came closer to me " Be at the park at 1:30 yeah." He whispered calmly in my ear so nobody could here. When Max tells you to do something it's impossible not too. Me and him share a secret that would destroy many things if it was found out...
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This is such a good story, I was really sad when you stopped writing your other story, but this was so worth it, you are really good at writing! :)
@onedirection19 thank you . I think little lovers was at its time to end but I don't really think I am but I will keep on writing part 3 will be out today afternoon ;)
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