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I could not save your life
No more than I could stop the tide
But know, you know, how hard I tried
And how I cried
When your hand left mine.

It was the same with all the rest-
Physical gestures from close to death
And I guess I must've noticed that
I can't take many more,
Not so important to me.

But I will, because, chin up!
All this history and tales
We'll never know their details
Slipping away from you,
And you did the same to us.

Emotions - the follies,
Hide all I want and they still lurk,
An ineffective bandage over the real hurt,
I need to remove, to erase, to crush my heart.

I could not save your life
No more than I could stop the tide
You, the vibrant ship in the sepia forest,
Are my shining gem, lost,
Precious to me from start to end.

mulishwhim

@mulishwhim

Yo. Me? I'm a professional Metaphor Creator - aka taking two things and sticking them together with determination and lots of glue to make a sandwich. (That's pretty much how I write, too. But hey, sandwiches are great, aren't they? Even if you have to look at the base idea of it.) Also known as a Thinker, Dreamer, Sleeper, and/or TalksTooMucher.

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