I'm off on a new adventure,
So please forgive me if I miss
Your marvellous poetry ventures,
Or wordy tales of pain and love,
And mysterious tales from above,
You must be sick of my talk of poo,
But, hey, it's just what I've got to do,
I won't be far, I'll read all I can,
This is just a note to say
I'm not ignoring you, man!
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
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@leelee101 @misslittleDHP - thankies, will still be around a bit - will just smell heavily of 💩🐷💩🐷! Ttfn!
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