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What is the point anymore?
I just lie, crying on the floor,
Wondering what life is for,
Looking at every closed door,

I tremble, releasing a sigh,
I give up on wondering why,
All that 'who are you?', 'who am I?'
And if I left, would you cry?

Just leave me to my tears,
Wasted, pitiless years,
Bottled up, clawing fears,
Drowning my sorrow in beers,

Just
Leave
Me to
This
Black hole,
Trust me
To
Jump
And to
Fall,
Just a tiny pebble
Down
A cliff wall,
No more wings,

Just,

No.

More.

No
More
Anything.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (26)

👏👏👏👏this is a new side to you I've never really seen before. Very good!

I love this, well done.. :)

@lonelynutmeg98 - perhaps because I'm too happy all the time! 😂😂😂 this isn't real for the moment though, sorry! 😉

@natalee - thanks sweetie!! 💚 hope you're alright!

Awe thank you! I'm sure I will be 😊

@naaviie oh no! I sounded like that as well I meant the writing side! Yes but no wonder your a happy person

@lonelynutmeg98 😂😂😂 it's ok honey I knew what you meant, I just like to tease! That why I use this 😜 face a lot 😜 always appreciating your feedback Megan ☺☺

@natalee glad to hear that 💚☺

@naaviie :) I can be slow sometimes and thanks too ☺

Blimey that's from the depths hunny. ❤ Really good 👍❤💋

Feeling this @naaviie 😣

Brill stuff here 🐫💦😖🐒💨💩😖💃💦😖

@leelee101 - long ago depths 💚😘✨

@lonelynutmeg98 - me too! No worries 😁😁

@Irrational_Kimmi awww hugs 💚🍸🍸✨

@glen - err

@glen - err thank you for the camel & dancer wee, with the side of monkey fart and poo. Excellent, how did you know?! 😂😂

@naaviie good, 'cos this is deep ❤😢

@naaviie sometimes a man just knows. 😂

@leelee101 aww 💚💋✨

@glen 😂 what a man! 😍😜😂😂

Great stuff😊👏

Loving this!! ❤💗❤😘

@mpallister24 @sjw - thank you girlies 💚💚💚

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