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I'm not depressed I just felt like writing something sad. Enjoy !

She said hey
Asked how was his day
He walked away
Didn't even ask her to stay

It was the middle of may
She told him she wasn't okay
He said he was gonna go play
He didn't ask her to stay

She knew she wasn't okay
When she couldn't throw the knives away
She got on her knees to pray
That he would ask her to stay

Today was her very last day
Before she passes away
The scars still won't go away
He should've asked her to stay

paintingskies

@paintingskies

I'm Samantha, 15 years old. If you'd like you can contact me here or on other apps listed below: Kik: slf97 Instagram: sammyleelee Twitter: slf97

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Comments & Feedback (8)

Nice very nice, Sam)

Mono-rhyming can be boring, don't write too much in this style)))

This is incredible! the rhymes are fantastic and I love it:)

@octopuss okay..I'll try. Thanks!

@dreamergirl really? Thanks!

@dreamergirl really? Thanks!

@paintingskies yeah it's really good! honestly I think this mono rhyme just worked. beautifully:)

Aww thanks (: haha it was a spur of the moment kind of thing!

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