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Friends For Life Pt 1

"Stop it! I'm not who you think I used to be! I'm not a kid any more! I've changed!"
I walk forward as she slowly steps back against the wall. I trap her. I put my hands either side of her head on the wall. I know I've startled her but I just have to tell her. I lean my head forward. Then I look into her dark brown eyes and say "My whole life we've been together. We were friends and I know I'm being selfish but I want more. I'm not that kid that used to cry anymore. I've grown. That includes my feelings for you. I..."
"Stop, Harry!Don't say anymore! I don't want to hear! We've been friends all this time and I don't want it to change! Please, lets just stay..."
I cut her off. I lean in for the kill. Our lips touch. For a second we connect and it ends so quick. My first kiss. She slaps me and runs away. I want to run after her. I know what I've done is unacceptable but she was staring at me with tears her brown hair struggling to stay away from her face. Her soft pale skin. A blush in her cheeks. The innocence of an angel. Why won't she let us be more than friends?
Before I leave the room, I whisper " I like you, Mia"

Penguin©

If you would like this to be a series please comment and tell me what you think it would be really helpful to help me improve. Thanks for reading.

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Comments & Feedback (13)

It sounds good! I've got like 3 storylines in my head!

Really I'm not sure if I can do a good plotline so don't know whether to carry on.. @tattyteddy

1. He has a mystery twin brother that he has just discovered and she falls in love with him( mystery twin )instead of the normal twin. 2. She falls for another guy, has kids, realises he's not the one, goes back to the first guy, falls in love. Live happily ever after. 3. She moves house to the other side of the world, he persuades her to stay yet she secretly goes anyway, leaving her old life behind, she gets a new one and while over there she finds out how perfect that guy is and goes back to him and discovers he has another girl. Lol :) sorry! I like writing - in the next one can you please tag me? Thanks ;) x

@tattyteddy your amazing! Wonderful imagination you've got! But how do I tag you? And what does it do?

@penguin tagging is where you say my user name ( you tagged me before by clicking on my comment) @tattyteddy ;)

@penguin thank you - all it does is it comes up on my profile so it'll make it easier to read for me so I don't have to scroll through all your opusses :)

Ooh I see Kay then when I do the next chapter Ill be sure to tag you! Thanks! Can you repost this please just so i can get other people's views? You don't have to If you dont want to. Thanks @tattyteddy

@penguin 😨😨😨😨 You've officially appealed to the hormonal teenager in me!! I want more!!!❤❤❤📑📑📑📑📑

I love it!! Please write more!! If u do please let me know!😘😄😘

If u write more cld u tag meh plez

@tattyteddy thanks for the repost btw

@ren360 Haha :D Lol @LittleKitten thanks @GingerC I'll be sure to tell you guys when I think up the next pt look forward to it. 😬

@penguin tag everyone!! Haha ( including me ) thnx

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