Far be it from me to tell anyone what to think. I'm not like that. This is just an observation. But WTF is up with this 50 shades rubbish. I have scanned the book...unimpressed. Have read more arousing stuff else where. It's MUCH more fun to actually DO these kinda things, then read about them.
Just my two cents. Everyone is entitled to their opinion. Don't linch me.
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Comments & Feedback (6)
Have you ever read a book called "I Hope They Serve Beer in Hell?" my husbands a brewmaster so my Mother got it for him for Christmas. It gives him unending pleasure that his Mother in law gave him such a debauched book. It's not erotic per se but this guys escapades are pretty crude
It's shit... The grammar is ridiculous and it reads like a 14 year old with a thesaurus. Repetitive and literal.
Thank you! It is simply a shit book. It's terribly written, I don't understand how it got past an editor.
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