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Picky.

Sometimes I feel like my writing is inferior,
Like others works of art are far superior,

I have felt unworthy and well below par,
With the words of verse and prose I have written so far,

Picking holes within my work is my favourite pastime,
Not liking the tone of a piece or its rhythm or its rhyme,

Self critical is my way,
To my self worth I betray,

But at this point in time I feel,
That as long as words I do not steal,

I should be proud that I can write effortlessly,
There are far less fortunate people than me,

People who can't spell or read or write,
People who can't put their view across without an internal fight,

People who cannot see written words from being blind,
People who cannot hear the beauty of words from all of mankind,

At least I have the ability to use my right to speak,
Even though I may be picky and many a word I may tweak,

I'm blessed with the power of words in all their glory,
I'm blessed with the power of words to tell my life and it's stories.

sammielee46

@sammielee46

Hi I'm Sam!!! Kik: sammielee46... "Dance lightly with life" - Jonathan Huie // "Wisdom begins with wonder" - Walt Whitman.

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Comments & Feedback (25)

You are too tough on yourself Sam I enjoy your work 😘❀

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I do too Sam ❀😘

@sjw thank you sweetie 😊 appreciate the rp 😘❀

@RichWithey thank you rich 😊 I dunno why you feel like that either I love your writing tis awesomeness πŸ‘πŸ˜˜ thank you for the lovely repost sweetie 😘❀

I am just the same...I always feel like I've fudged a word or a verse or stanza. I like your writing Sam and obviously many more do also 😘

You are your own worst critic, you know. But I know what you mean, we've all been through that, I'm sure. Just keep it up! ❀😘

@sarahgamal you have absolutely nothing to worry about I love the way you write 😊 thank you for the rp honey 😘❀

@patdolan83 thank you hun and you've nothing to worry about either I thoroughly enjoy your writing 😘 thank you for the fab rp Hun 😘❀

@paintingskies definitely we all are harsh on ourselves to create a masterpiece 😊 thank you honey appreciate the rp 😘❀

@sammielee46 I meant I do love your work too 😊 I always comfort myself that's it's not my first language really 😊 but thank you. And stop being hard on yourself

Your miles better than me πŸ˜ƒπŸ¬πŸ’¨

Amen to that Sammie! Amen to that!

Ahhh, perfectionism, it's a curse! I've always thought you are one of the better ones on here! πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸŒŸ

All of us can get better, and hopefully do, but you should always be proud that your words and thoughts are your own, and you don't fall prey to any rank chasing shortcuts!

That's why your work is excellent - because you check it, tweak it until you are happy with it. Bravo Sam - love this! πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΈπŸ’œβœ¨

@glen hardly 😊 your posts never cease to make me laugh πŸ‘πŸ‘ thank you for the rp 😘❀

@leelee101 thank you for the fab rp honey 😘❀

@merlin1038 πŸ‘πŸ‘βœ‹πŸ˜˜

@ckahn thank you honey 😊 perfectionism sure is a curse 😱 thank you for the lovely repost 😘❀

@VikingHorn thank you honey 😊 completely agree with you there 😊😘

@TheCodsPollocks thanks honey 😊😘 appreciate that fab repost too 🍺😘❀

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€ excellent

@LiSaC64 thanks honey 😘 and thank you for that fabulous repost 😘❀❀

Well, I think your work is brilliant! I always enjoy reading your posts and obviously many, many other people do too. So don't worry, just enjoy and have some fun along the way honey. βœ¨πŸŒŸβœ¨πŸŒŸβ˜•β˜•β˜•πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚

@sleepydragon aw thank you honey 😊😊 appreciate your kind words and that lovely repost πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸŒΉβ€

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