So apparently I need to learn to rhyme,
So what if I can't it's not a crime,
Maybe I need to go back to school,
Then over lyrical perfection I can drool,
Or maybe I just write what I feel,
That way my writing is not fake it's real,
Feel the ink through your veins,
Be able to write about passions and gains,
Be able to wax lyrical,
About anything become satirical,
Anything absurd obscene,
Things in between,
Angulated writing a mess of words,
A mess on the page a writing of blurs,
For one thing I surely know,
Is if I choose to rhyme I can do so.
Call it poetic license if you wish,
Everyone's writing is their own special poetic dish.
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@sarahgamal amen to that honey!! Anybody can rhyme it's getting it to make some sort of sense that's the hardest bit :D x
@sammielee46 some of the best poems don't rhyme. I think that comment on your other Opuss was rather rude tbh! I like your non-rhyme just fine - I write like that a lot too.
@Irrational_Kimmi thank you honey and I agree! Some of the best poems in the world don't rhyme. Surely it should be about meaning and the images you convey to people through your writing! Well that's what I try to do! :)
Love it! Writing is what u make it! Who could possibly tell you how to capture your feelings and emotions! 👌👍
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