Many moons ago
Yin was feeling low
Shades of black tainted her heart
Through her journey to a brand new start
Endless rivers of tears she cried
Resenting her heart cause it lied
In her white heart there is now a black dot
Only she can spot
Until one day a boy named yang came along
Shared his story about his tainted black heart and together they became strong
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@yikici not one of my best writes but trying to get out of a mental block π hope it makes sense π
@yikici just reread it again seems missing a proper ending or lacking meaning. Ah well I tried ππ
@sarahgamal mmm yes your point is well made. Then it would definitely be a π‘π‘π‘ face! ππ
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