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Mysterious/Yin Yang

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Many moons ago
Yin was feeling low
Shades of black tainted her heart
Through her journey to a brand new start
Endless rivers of tears she cried
Resenting her heart cause it lied
In her white heart there is now a black dot
Only she can spot
Until one day a boy named yang came along
Shared his story about his tainted black heart and together they became strong

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Comments & Feedback (18)

@yikici not one of my best writes but trying to get out of a mental block πŸ˜” hope it makes sense 😘

Great depiction of yin and yangπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸΊ

@yikici just reread it again seems missing a proper ending or lacking meaning. Ah well I tried 😁😘

@evilfingerz yeah? Did it make sense? And thanks for rp 😘

@sarahgamal too harsh Sarah, it's a sweet lil' write hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Yes, I think so

@leelee101 it is harsh? Why? Thanks for rp 😘

I think it's lovely and makes perfect sense πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@sarahgamal no silly, too harsh on yourself! 😘

@leelee101 ahh ok. Been in car for 3 hrs so 😳😳 face now

@sjw thanks Sienna and kisses for rp😘😘

@sarahgamal πŸ˜‚ better than a 😑 face. Or even a 😒 face. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 would have if I was driving and without all my iThings 😊

@sarahgamal mmm yes your point is well made. Then it would definitely be a 😑😑😑 face! 😘😘

Awww this is really sweet @sarahgamal it makes a lot of sense, it's very cute. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

@yikici ok glad it's not "mysterious" then 😜 thanks for rp😘😘

😳It's a great write -a

😳It's a great write -a rather elusive mysterious write; but nonetheless a fab entry. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

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