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Oceans Of Despair

As I drown in fathoms of pain,
I know you won't come back again.
And as I'm sinking, ever falling,
It's your love that I'm mourning.
@Platypus

I try to stand against the tide,
Waves of tears, I have cried.
I see all hope start to capsize,
Through stinging water coloured eyes.
@leelee101

It haunts in bouts, your very essence,
Never leaving, decapitating.
Sometimes taunts, sometimes cheers.
But always brings in floods of tears.
@Yikici

The floods ebb and flow like the tides of the sea.
My love for you was love of complexity.
My heart doesn't beat in my hollow chest.
For you aren't here and I am bereft.
@Sammielee46

Drifting we're now oceans apart,
Hurt has ripped through our hearts.
An underlying current pulls us down.
Murky waters lay all around.
@sjw

All my vision, is now so very blurred,
I'm wondering if, my voice was ever heard ?
So as I start to sink, to the bottom of my despair,
I just start wondering, if you were even there ?
@stablish

Or was it all a dream that started with "The End"?
And now I am weighed down with a heart that I can't mend
Mourning the loss of the love that once belonged to me
Mourning the end of a dream that was never meant to be
@sarahgamal

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Comments & Feedback (23)

@Platypus @leelee101 @yikici @sjw @sammielee46 @Stablish Really hard towards the end 😔 not quiet happy with my bit too but hope it fits😘

I think it's great, it fits really nicely, could even be a good ending I suppose. Top job Sarah 😘😘

@Stablish oh thank you ❤😘 so now what do I do? I think it could be an end too

Err..... Not sure, I think we should ask @Platypus or @leelee101. I'm so bad at deciding, I can see it carrying on maybe but I think yours fits really nice as an ending, I guess we'll just wait for some more verdicts😘

@sarahgamal I think it's a really good end, but what to do next...

@Stablish well you would be able to put something on the end, wouldn't you? Ask @leelee101, I'm feeling indecisive

@Platypus ok will wait and see Lee?

Ha ha, I'm easy with whatever, it could easily work both ways. Leelee must be having dinner at the moment I think. Lets let him decide lol👍👍

Fabulous addition honey 😘❤👏👏👏 I agree it's a fitting ending 💋💋

Oooo a lovely addition, very elusive, could be the end or there could be more. If you feel it's come to a natural end then you can declare it's finished ☺ if you feel it could be worked on some more, tag another fab Opussian in. 😉😘💐☺✨

@yikici @sammielee46 thank you lovely ladies... I think will declare it the end then

@sammielee46 thank u Sam for rp 😘😘

@sarahgamal I think yours sees it off nicely Sarah. And @Platypus, look what you did! Awesome stuff! 👍😘 What a cracker @sjw @Stablish @yikici@sammielee46 fantastic job everyone great verses all round 👏👏👏👍😘🍻❤

@leelee101 great thanks lee 😊

@leelee101 you began it though! 😄👍

@yikici kisses for rp 😘😘

Nicely ended 👏👏👏😘💐

Yup, great effort by all -excellent job @Platypus @sarahgamal @leelee101 @sammielee46 @Stablish @sjw 😘💐✨

@Platypus no, you did hun. You posted the original verse, so I give the credit to you 👍❤😘

Great job everyone! Lovely from beginning to end👏👏👏👏👏🌟🌟🌟🌟

@patdolan83 thanks for rp 😘

@sjw thanks Sienna and 🍸🍸 for rp 😘

@BVHarding thank you 😘

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