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Letting Go.

serenityeverard
serenityeverard • 204 followers

How do I do it. How do I release my hold on what I think is mine? What I know was mine. When did it stop being mine?

Why did I lose my grasp? Why did I let go for so long? Why can't I pull myself back in near you?

Why do I even want to be near you? Why do I want you to love me? There's nothing there but heart ache, yet I want to lie in your embrace and let the hurt consume me.

Make me let you go. Theres no other way to make me accept it other than you telling me that you don't and won't love me.

This is me letting go

#emotional-vulnerability #heartbreak #inner-struggle #personal #self-reflection #unrequited-love
serenityeverard

@serenityeverard

I am an exceptional writer....so says my teacher. I'm here to see if she's right. I want to prove to myself that I'm not being fed a load of crap. I wanna be criticized as much as you guys can criticize me. Tell me what would make my stories better. Tell me if I spell something wrong. Tell if my ideas are boring and mainstream or too out of the ordinary. Just judge my writing the best you can Kay? I use writing to rid myself of emotions so don't be too surprised if plot lines change dramatically. So, you wanna know about me right? That's the only reason you keep reading...I'm a 16 year old girl from san diego. I'm a navy brat, so that means I've been every where. I like to meet new people and I love to travel. I dream of living on the road, and documenting things in my life through writing, photography and cinematography.

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Comments & Feedback (2)

Freez
Freez
Apr 10, 2012 at 12:52 AM

The soothing hand of time rubs away the heart ache and allows space for a new better love.

serenityeverard
serenityeverard
Apr 10, 2012 at 2:53 AM

I wish I could believe that. Unfortunately it's been 8 months. I cant seem to give up. I wish I didn't love him any more cus it's only hurting the both of us

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