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Darkness Creeps

Flicker
Eyes open
Twitch
We turn, we gaze at the imperfect cracked white paint,
Now a dull haze in the dark
We sit. We stretch.
Creatures dance across the walls
Black shapes twist and turn through the air

Huddle
Cloth pulled tight under chin
Legs bunched fiercely to chest
We lay still again. We breathe, close eyes, relax?
Flicker
Breathe. Lay. Ignore.
Black shapes looming, black shapes approaching.
Ignore. Lay. Ignore.

Flicker
We hiss in agitation. Spring towards the lamp
Stare a moment, stare at the black shapes, the shadows waiting for the darkness
Before the satisfying click
Plunging the room into light

They are not real

We lay back in stillness. In silence.
Ignoring the doubts, ignoring the dark shapes
Concealed in the bleak blankness of the predatory dark.

With the light on the shapes pull back.
All is still
We lay, close eyes, prepare for dreams again.

'We are the children of the night
We are the ones of waking sleep'

Flicker
Ignore. Close eyes. Ignore.

shanwan

@shanwan

I'm 25 from Berkshire, UK. Currently attempting to avoid distraction and write a novel (mostly failing at avoiding distraction). Please check out the bf's stuff as well @iamjordanlee :)

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Comments & Feedback (13)

This is absolutely brilliant!! Well done! I love you choice of words. Very descriptive! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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@michga oh thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

I totally agree, this describes many a night I have had : )

@shapple30 I always wake up between 3 and 4, which is supposed to be the devils hour (I have the exorcism of Emily rose to thank for that knowledge) end up totally freaking myself out

I'm exactly the same, and for the same reason lol. I don't look at the time anymore! : )

Wow...a powerful piece, conjured up some wonderfully dark images in my mind..brilliant!!

@shapple30 a wise choice! I think I'll join you in that haha

@Dovahkiin thanks so much! Don't have nightmares ;)

@shanwan I hope not! I'll just keep telling myself I'm fine lol

@Dovahkiin haha! I'm

Stupid send button... I'm sure your sleeps will be trouble free! :)

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@RichWithey thank you! :)

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