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Destroyed

We laughed
and loved
and I thanked
the one above
we gave each
other everything
far into the night
we'd be singing.
Then you went
and destroyed us
you begged and
begged but it
wasn't enough
I was ripped apart
you though our
relationship
was a laugh.
I never knew before
that day what it
was like to not
want to stay
I was kept awake
while you shouted
at my door
but I decided I
needed more.
For months it
went on you
wanting to become
number one
but because I had
given you everything
there was nothing
left to fix.
I'm telling the truth
I was never good
at tricks,
I sat in my burst bubble
my perfect world
now only rubble.
I was left alone,
empty except the
pang in my heart
that hadn't been
there at the start.
Curled in on my self
I cried, cried and cried
Hardly anyone
left on my side
you had the sympathy
I had nothing
not even empathy.
People would talk
I was broken in two
They'd walk past me
and whisper 'who?'
and sadly I knew.

sjw

@sjw

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Comments & Feedback (23)

Starting as a song...no idea where it came from maybe too many sad movies lol 😳

Started*

Oh dear it's so sad 😭

Wow. πŸ‘πŸ‘ real good Hun 😒 πŸ‘β€πŸŒΉ

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

@skinnylove thank you for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@candyland_massacre thank you for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@sara_lou thanks for the RP πŸ’

@minxyMolly thank you for the RP πŸ’πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 thank you! And have some β˜•πŸ° for the RP 😘

@naaviie @MrsS I know right, I need to get back to my action movies lol πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

@ckahn thank you for the RP πŸ’πŸ°β˜•πŸ˜˜

@sjw I gladly accept... Just caught an Eddie comment...you ok hun? 😒

@sjw pardon my ignorance... the cat... sorry... ❀😒

@leelee101 yeah I'm ok, it's always hard losing a pet isn't it whatever the circumstances, I can't stop thinking how she must be feeling all alone, is she going to miss us etc...I know I'm silly I guess animals are my achilles heel a bit..thanks for your concern ill cheer up soon ☺😘

Big huggies my sweetπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ

@sjw yes it's hard, we've lost enough over the years, but if there's a danger then it has to be for the best hunny 😒❀🌹

Awww πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

@misslittleDHP thank you it's purely fictional tho, but always accepting of hugs lol thanks for the RP β€πŸ’—β€πŸ’πŸ˜˜

@Augustus thank you for the RP πŸ’β˜Ί

@smellyfingers thank you for the RP hun πŸ˜˜β€πŸ’—β€

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@RichWithey yeah it's an odd one this it kind of started as song and then turned into a poem I think I'd had a few sad movie nights lol but thanks for your comment its appreciated as always x

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@RichWithey lol is that your OCD kicking in!

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