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Family Ties. Pt II

"Clara let me help you."

The words had called to me, in a voice that was unfamiliar and chilling. Then I was back to reality, back in control. I could feel my heartbeat in my ear like a distant drum. My hands were cold and clammy, this was no dream, or overactive imagination.

WTF! I needed to get out of here as quickly as possible, I didn't even gather up my stuff I just ran. I suddenly became aware of the eerie ness of my surroundings, the silence, absent of even a night owl, the headstones, that cast out shadows like dark gargoyles over the ground. I'd left my torch behind, and this place felt like the scariest place on earth.

I had no idea where the gate was, or even if I was running in the right direction, all I knew was I had to keep moving, although I couldn't see anyone, I knew I was being followed and the Moon offered me very little assistance.

I tripped over something, landing at the entrance of a mausoleum, had it not been for the name engraved above its entrance, I would've kept running. But curiosity and an element of surprise, got the better of me. WHITLOCK was engraved in large ornate writing, a coincidence? Maybe, but not the family crest, that was carved into the weathered Portland Stone, I'd seen that crest before, I knew it well because it belonged to my family.

My mind was snapped back to my current situation, by the sound of footsteps getting closer, thankfully the clouds had moved, the moon highlighted my path towards the large iron gates. I ran and clambering over it fumbled in my pocket, thankfully the car keys were there. switching on the engine I screeched out of the car park.

"Clara, let me help you."

There was that chilling voice again, but where was it coming from? Looking in the rear view mirror, my blood ran cold.

*Any suggestions/criticisms welcome x

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Hope it doesn't disappoint ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw it doesn't! Love it :) keep me tagged! <3

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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I likey hun, nice bite sized chapters, and I think you've pulled in enough people now, you know you gotta carry it on! ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

It just gets better, Sie! ๐Ÿ‘โค

Still loving it Sienna. And I think that this one is even better than part I . And loving the way u r describing her movement and night ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ looking forward to part 3 ๐Ÿ˜˜

@RachelleB thank you and I will do ๐Ÿ˜˜โค

@ashhkat thank you ๐Ÿ˜˜

@LiSaC64 thank you for the read ๐Ÿ˜˜โค

@leelee101 thanks hun, yes I'm enjoying it now I've kept it bitesize because I struggle to read anymore than that most of the time so thought it would have more appeal ๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿป๐Ÿป for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@BearScribbler thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw yup that's good thinking sweety ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

@HeatherAnne thanks hun really appreciate that from a story writer ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

@sammielee46 ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿธfor the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sarahgamal thank you Sarah appreciate the encouragement ๐Ÿ˜˜ and the RP ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿธ

@yikici I always tag you wrong ๐Ÿ˜˜

Ooo I really love this part, so soooo much better than the first part, you've brought in your way with words in here -this is great -now I'll be impatiently waiting for the next part. Make sure you tag me in correctly then. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ˜˜โœจ

@yikici thank you! I tried to take on board the feedback I got so I'm glad it's better ill tag you properly thank you for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’โค

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@RichWithey thank you darling appreciate it and mwaah! For the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿป

Keep going. ๐Ÿ‘ Setting the scene nicely and good suspense. ๐Ÿ’š Coyld you tag me I case I miss it? ๐Ÿ˜˜

@eddie12309 thanks Eddie, and the punctuation? I'll be happy too thank you for the lovely RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’

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Haha. Trying to catch up. How's poppies walking?

@eddie12309 lol you asked me that on my other post and I answered on it ๐Ÿ˜‚ she's good into everything and everywhere but is still happy to be carried I don't want her growing up too quickly she's one next month ๐Ÿ˜ฑ how's Erin doing I bet she's an expert already ๐Ÿ˜˜

Did I??? I'm Losing the plot, sorry for repeating myself ๐Ÿ˜ฑ I'm losing the plot. Erin hardly crawling now. She's like frankensteins little monster. Very funny when music comes on that she likes. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

@eddie12309 Awww bless her, Pops is the same when it comes to music I'm so eager to get her in a tutu ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜

I confess..... Erin has a black tutu. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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