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Group Poem

This is the 2nd verse of the group poem that was started by @patdolan if anyone wants to take part let us know in the comments.

I saw it.....it happened
Right in front of my eyes
But wait....it couldn't of happened
My brains telling me a lie.

.......Are my eyes lying
Was it just a trick, an illusion
......My mind is denying
Wrapped in a cloak of confusion.

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Opuss has given me a love of words and writing...

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Hope I haven't missed anyone @smellyfingers your next!

Oooh great edition sienna! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ‘โœจ

Perfect, well done babe!! I'll do my bit in a little while. X

Ooh like ๐Ÿ‘ :D

@patdolan @eddie12309 thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜

@naaviie thanks Nic and mwaah for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’

@smellyfingers thanks for the RP look forward to yours ๐Ÿ˜˜

@iwritesongs glad you like it I'm loving this idea ๐Ÿ˜˜

Fabbo Hun ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@misslittleDHP thanks Kim and for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’

Excellent! What fun!๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒŸ

@ckahn thank you and mwaah for the RP check out smellys piece he's done the 3rd ๐Ÿ˜˜

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