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Oceans Of Despair.

As I drown in fathoms of pain,
I know you won't come back again,
And as I'm sinking, ever falling,
It's your love that I am mourning.
@Platypus

I try to stand against the tide,
Waves of tears I have cried,
I see all hope start to capsize,
Through stinging water coloured eyes.
@leelee101

It haunts in bouts - your very essence,
Never leaving - decapitating,
Sometimes taunts, sometimes cheers,
But always brings in floods of tears.
@yikici

The floods ebb and flow like the tides of the sea,
My love for you was love of complexity,
My heart doesn't beat in my hollow chest,
For you aren't here and I am bereft.
@sammielee46

Drifting we're now oceans apart,
hurt has ripped through our hearts.
An underlying current pulls us down,
murky waters lay all around.
@sjw

sjw

@sjw

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Comments & Feedback (19)

And @stablish your up 😘

Woo hoo -a fab fab addition -I was thinking how to incorporate murky waters but failed to add it -so extra brilliance to that. ☺✨ Lee's piece should have hope not hoe in it. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

Really nicely done Sienna, I shall carry it on with pleasure, there seems to be a bit more left so I won't feel bad for ending it this time lol😘

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Love this addition πŸ˜˜β€πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@yikici extra brilliance award I like it lol thanks hun and mwaah for the RP 😘

@Stablish thank you your piece was excellent mwaah for the RP 😘🍻

@sarahgamal thanks Sarah for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

@minxyMolly mwaah for the RP 😘❀

@ckahn thank you Kristina for the kind RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

I've got a hoe in my piece? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@leelee101 pmsl how did that get there is it in your original piece? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@sjw no! πŸ˜‚ Pretty sure I'd have noticed a hoe hanging around! πŸ˜‚

@leelee101 why you complaining its a benefit isn't it! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 it means your gangsta innit! πŸ˜‚

@sjw me gangsta? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@RichWithey thank you for the RP 😘❀

@vieromero πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’for the RP

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