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One Day.....

When I opened my eyes..I was strapped to a bed no longer me
Violated, abused and drugged...but why couldn't anyone see
I was dead inside...an empty shell my emotions had been taken
Only my body remained memories erased....my world shaken
I remembered those deep hypnotic eyes, that smile....the drink
Should've known it was too good to be true....why didn't I think
All I had been was a commodity, a meal ticket....a cash sign
This is my life now, to trust someone....had been my only crime
Two years ago I lost me, this is now my prison....what I'd become
I wish to one day open my eyes and see nothing....but the sun.

sjw

@sjw

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Chilling stuff😨😨 Great writeπŸ‘πŸ‘

@RichWithey @minxyMolly @TheGoldenRibbon thanks for RP 😘😘😘

@Stablish thanks! It's what I was aiming for glad it came across mwaah for the RP πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

Harrowing picture brilliantly painted πŸ‘πŸ‘

@patdolan83 thanks hun it was loosely based on a film I watched years ago called Revenge with Kevin Costner and Anthony Quinn I think I was 16 at the time but it really disturbed me watched it again recently and it's still a brilliant movie kisses for the RP πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

@sammielee46 thank you for the RP πŸ˜ŠπŸ’πŸ’

I want to know what happens next

Ooo that's good sienna πŸ‘β€πŸ˜’πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@tetti2 it's up to you lol thanks for the RP Terri πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

@leelee101 thanks hun mwaah for the RP πŸ’‹πŸ»πŸ»

Excellent write with strong hidden message too. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜”

@sjw indeed x

I love wht u post if u new me we will be best friends

@eddie12309 thanks Eddie glad you picked up on that thank you for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

@buble thank you glad you like it and welcome to opuss 😊

Strong strong message πŸ˜”

@sarahgamal thank you for the RP Sarah πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

@sjw brilliant piece babe,powerfull message and very well written β€πŸ˜˜πŸ‘xx

If only I could share this with all the guys Iv met who seem to think its normal my god it will sure open there eyes .

@tannar thank you for reading 😊

It's always a pleasure reading you.

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