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For @HingAling24

We all live in our little bubbles of bliss
Head in the clouds getting high and seeking new kicks
Ignorance disguises more lies for our kids
A truth in a reality that we all have missed

A little time could change a mind.
Be it a widowed wife with a knife wishing to end her life, full of strife.
Always sat at home alone, her neighbours don't know....'cos they are too stoned

The bigger the explanation the larger the lie.
The smaller the tear the longer we cry.
We all walk on by...Why when a small sacrifice could save someones life?

A little time could change a mind.
Late mortgage repayment comes with a hefty fine
Debt collector knows where a widow lives, the names of her kids, he wants what she can't give and he's proud of it.
Always sat at home alone, her neighbours just didn't know....'cos they were too stoned

The bigger the explanation the larger the lie.
The smaller the tear the longer we cry.
We all walk on by...Why when a small sacrifice could save someones life?

A little time could change a mind.
Consumed by greed, actively seeking relief in exploiting people's need unknowingly fuelling their grief leading to a disbelief in a life they want to achieve.....I scream out stop the lies please, time has me on my knees!

The bigger the explanation the larger the lie.
The smaller the tear the longer we cry.
We all walk on by...Why when a small sacrifice could save someones life?

A little time could change a mind.
Will the vicious circles stop this time?
When will we learn there's no bottom, middle or top?
When our blissful bubbles are popped?
We're all in this together, our life legacy lives forever.
So use your time wisely 'cos a little time could change a mind.

The bigger the explanation the larger the lie.
The smaller the tear the longer we cry.
We all walk on by...Why when a small sacrifice could save someones life?

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (19)

@HingAling24 β˜ΊπŸ‘

This is epicπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Beautifully written. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Wow ok I'm gonna need time to take this all in! Lol straight away I've noticed some things I absolutely love, I've jus got to see if I can sing it haha πŸ‘πŸ˜œ

Awesome knew you'd do it proud! πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

@sarahgamal @221BBakerSt thank you both πŸ‘πŸ‘

@HingAling24 lol no worries mate, can change, edit, delete or try another angle? Whatever works πŸ‘

@sjw ☺ thank you babe πŸ’‹

Wow. New so g writing duo. You saw it here first!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

I'm like the neighbor I can't help because I'm to stoned πŸ˜ƒπŸš¬

@smellyfingers Ok personally I think it's brilliant! Love the added verses, love the idea of incorporating repetition from verse to verse, the structures perfect! I think if we were sat in a room together we could come up with some truly amazing songs! ( might have to be done) lol I would have to add a few words to the first verse to make it roll of the tongue easier eg 'we all live our lives in little' + 'getting high proud' You have given me a lot of inspiration and I think with a minimal amount of tweaking there's an amazing song! We have to have that line on the jumping in there...it's provocative! We want people to dance lol! I will post another edited version tomorrow and please give me another back then this songs ours to share ;) cheers mate...productive day πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜œπŸ˜œβ€

@eddie12309 I think I shall have to agree! @glen You need to check on ya neighbour more haha thank you people! β€πŸ‘πŸ˜œ

@eddie12309 lol thanks babe πŸ’‹

@glen πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜±πŸ˜œπŸ‘ love thy neighbour glen Lmfao

@HingAling24 cool with me mate. I have written a fair amount of song style pieces (some rap stuff too), that may/may not work. If you can get kik messenger then add me and we can take more πŸ‘

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Very nice message! One that needs a good beating into our headsπŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

I'm gonna try download that app tonight and edit the song and kick start the talking tomorrow! But yeah very happy with it! And why didn't you say you write music listened to your first one and loved it! ;)

@smellyfingers is the edited version swaying towards one family!? With an obvious addiction lol The concept is cool but I wanna try keep it as let's say 3 neighbours living next door other than that its coming along swimmingly ;) I've had to make some unusual changes to be able to perform it! Has to suit my lyrical rhythm haha πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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