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smellyfingers
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You're not a Fading Fatality
You're not the girl that hates
Of all the things your not my dear
Its cos your not a fake

I loved our little time we shared
I loved that we evolved
Of all the things I loved the most
It's cos your heart glows

I'm smiling that you trusted
I'm smiling cos you asked
Of all the things I'm smiling for
It's cos our love won't pass

I'm happy that you're smiling
I'm happy that you laugh
Of all the things I'm happy for
It's cos your born to last

I love that we connected
I love that we were true
Of all the things I love the most
It's cos you loved me too

Footnote:
This piece is for @fadingfatality

If you read @fadingfatality posts (the 1 underneath the 1 titled "him" then, read "him") then, hopefully my poem will make more sense. :-)

XxxxxxX

#emotional-journey #general #love-poem #personal-connection
smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (30)

lonelynutmeg98
lonelynutmeg98
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:11 PM

Bless! Someone's in love! :D

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:12 PM

Awwww I know awwwww @smellyfingers oooo she's a lucky lady 😍

glen
glen
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:13 PM

Tonight's poems have been exceptional, yourself included

fadingfatality
fadingfatality
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:30 PM

Omg awwwwww

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:30 PM

@aleishagayle20 thanks! She a very special young lady indeed, it is I who is lucky to have crossed paths with her.

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:31 PM

@glensaggs thanks mate! Yeah I agree some I have read have been right up there, I'm just trying to catch the buggers up, lol

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:31 PM

@lonelynutmeg98 thank you.....I love everybody ;-)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:32 PM

@smellyfingers aaaawwwwwe that's do cute well very happy for you have fun 😍

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:41 PM

@fadingfatality glad you liked it ;-) x

fadingfatality
fadingfatality
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:42 PM

Loved it. It made my day

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:44 PM

@fadingfatality cool and that's good to know.......see all it takes is love ;-) Mwah x

Weirdwolf
Weirdwolf
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:48 PM

@smellyfingers that, my friend was beautiful, and heartfelt. I bet that made her smile both inside and out :)

Zoodark
Zoodark
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:56 PM

Very nice at the close, man :O) J x

Zoodark
Zoodark
Apr 24, 2012 at 11:56 PM

@smellyfingers

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 12:15 AM

@Weirdwolf thank you, it certainly made me feel good, knowing she felt good, lol :-)

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 12:15 AM

@Zoodark thanks man.....love is great isn't it....lol :-)

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 12:56 AM

@aleishagayle20 @glensaggs @Weirdwolf @Zoodark thanks for all your comments!! I have added a footnote to this poem, it should make more sense now. ;-)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Apr 25, 2012 at 1:02 AM

@smellyfingers awww that's sweet :-)

Zoodark
Zoodark
Apr 25, 2012 at 1:58 AM

@smellyfingers it does make sense and your lady is beautiful. Then again, I would have know that from your words if nothing else! J x

Stablish
Stablish
Apr 25, 2012 at 5:54 AM

Beautiful stuff, you have a gift for bringing love, (-:

Stablish
Stablish
Apr 25, 2012 at 5:54 AM

@smellyfingers

TommyVice
TommyVice
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:13 AM

@smellyfingers nicely worded dude :) (not wanting to sound like a grammar nazi here, but it's "you're", not "your") keep up the good work!

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:22 AM

@aleishagayle20 lol thanks x

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:24 AM

@Zoodark thanks man, altho she is not mine. @fadingfatality is a member on opuss I was chatting with the other day, we have never met in person.

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:25 AM

@Stablish thank you, we all have it if we look and try ;-)

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:29 AM

@TommyVice thank you! My grammar is bad, leaving school at 14 with dyslexia wasn't good. Thank you for pointing it out :-)

TommyVice
TommyVice
Apr 25, 2012 at 9:48 AM

No worries man, you're rockin it!

lonelynutmeg98
lonelynutmeg98
Apr 25, 2012 at 10:27 PM

@smellyfingers to say you left school at 14 with dyslexia your grammar is quite good and your writing even better so moving!

lonelynutmeg98
lonelynutmeg98
Apr 25, 2012 at 10:28 PM

@smellyfingers your love isn't yours? Why? Doesn't she love you?

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
Apr 25, 2012 at 10:39 PM

@lonelynutmeg98 lol thanks! Did you read the description in the footnote and follow the link to who this is for? Lol

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