Would You Hate Me

soheir8912 • 5 followers

If you could read my thoughts,
If you could go through my life like an open book,
If you could see me for who I really am,
Would you hate me?

Sometimes I feel I would despise myself,
Had all the above been given to thought,
Sometimes I sink and drown in self loathe,
Till there is no more hatred left to hold,

I do believe that the flaws we see in others are the reflection of ourselves,
But do we owe ourselves some forgiveness?
Can someone truly be as messed up as me?
Is it ok to be as flawed a person as I am?
Could repentance hover and could I be able to finally be free?

#emotional-vulnerability #existential-crisis #introspection #personal #personal-growth #self-reflection

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Comments & Feedback (2)

Jul 29, 2012 at 7:01 AM

I feel you. Lol I've never said that before in my life but I feel that saying it is appropriate here

Jul 30, 2012 at 4:44 PM

I'm glad u do ;) it's actually amazing when u find that someone relates :)

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