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You Say

You say,
That he's
Slowly drifting away,
But really,
I am;

You see,
He disappears
Fading away,
But really,
I am;

You sense,
That he's
Withdrawn,
But really,
I am;

You say
You sense
He's fading,
But really,
I am;

You see
Me, so I can't
Be drifting?
But really,
I am;

You sense
Happiness, so I can't
Be fading?
But really,
I am;

You can't see
The silent screams,
The pale me,
The true lies,
You can't;

You can't sense
The hidden shield,
The agony,
The enduring torture,
You can't;

You can't,
You won't
Notice me,
He's drifting away,
You say;

But really,
That's me,
Silently screaming,
Silently drifting
Away;

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I just wrote this and read it 3 times, and I've got 3 different meanings to this! So please comment your interpretations 

toriaelizabeth

@toriaelizabeth

You can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time but you can't please all of the people all of the time xx

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Comments & Feedback (3)

Girl friend got a boyfriend but she's being dramatic so she says he's drifting away and the girl who is the girl's friend who has a boy friend says no, I'm the one drifting away, not him. You ignore me. So yeah complicated.

@Klaire Thats a good one, hadn't thought of that one πŸ˜„πŸ˜Ί

A couple of some sort broke up, and a close friend or family member of one of them tries to blame it on the other, but the one talking is saying that they're the one who tried to end it even though it nearly kills them.

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