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Behind Closed Doors

Behind closed doors was a man,

He hides most flaws if he can.

When people look on,

They see nothing's wrong,

But inside his emotions are gone.

Behind closed doors there he stands,

Pretends to himself he's a man,

When people look on,

They see nothing's wrong,

But inside he's afraid to move on.

Behind closed doors with a plan,

To list all the flaws that he can.

The people look on,

Waiting for response,

But inside he don't think that he can.................

...................................................

Behind closed doors was a boy,

Who knew his flaws could destroy,

All the things that he loved,

With a huff and a puff,

Still behind closed doors he's a boy.

XSTABLISHX

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Wow.

@extreme_bookworm that one came from deep within, thanks for reading .

Brilliant!

@Cam thanks so much (:

@Stablish I can see that :) its REALLY, REALLY AMAZING! (I need to step it up) :P

@extreme_bookworm thank you do much, mine are getting a bit longer each time, keep going your doing well.

So#

Well done mate :)

@1of5 Thanks much appreciated.

@Stablish you're welcome :) its a good read. Thank you for that!

This actually scared me slightly.... So beautifully written. I love it.

Yeah it's pretty dark, just how I feel sometimes, supposed to be grown but still scared of the world and death like a kid, and afraid to let my feelings out to family and friends, personal issues with smoking weed all sorts! Hopefully next one will be a bit lighter, thanks for reading.

Grown people are allowed to be scared of the

Grown people are allowed to be scared of the world. I like that it's dark, it tells us how you really feel! Especially if your afraid to let your feelings out to those close to you... This platform allows you to do just that. All your posts are genuinely so good. Love reading them!

Thank you so much, I guess I have found what I'm good at, only took two minutes to write that one, thanks for the support @GroundB

It's turn you never know what happens behind closed doors

You need to write another story like that

@16dinaadorable119 Thanks for reading, I can feel one coming today, might upload on @DarkStablish tho . (-:

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