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No One Noticed

No one noticed
Those sad, sad eyes
They saw her smile
And believed her lies,

No one noticed
She was so alone
How trapped she felt,
How hurt she'd grown,

No one noticed
The pain she hid
Why should they care
About some messed up kid?

No one noticed
She was slipping away,
She could only hope
They'd care some day.

Zoey

zoeygoesrawr

@zoeygoesrawr

Bye

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Comments & Feedback (24)

Nice stuff😊👍 Welcome to Opuss...I think:?

@Blueblotts thank you!

it's beautiful

@rabbitheartedgirl thanks!

This poem is really nice.. I could relate a bit... Thats why you are my inspiration (:

This is beautiful Zoey💚

That was really good!

Zoey you're a really good writer<3 can't wait to see more of your work

Unnoticed. ...i love it.

Zoey I follow you on instagram, and I just wanted to say that you are so inspirational and I love you❤

Amazing

This is beautiful...

love this poem, it's relatable & beautiful

This is beautiful. Just beautiful.

Thanks so much everyone

@zoeygoesrawrr lovely. I also follow you on Instagram and I'm so pleased to see you here on Opuss! 😘

@zoeygoesrawrr I love this piece and think I need to follow you on Instagram ;)

@zoeygoesrawrr you are an inspiration

Great poem, looking forward to more 👏👏

Amazing

Beautiful piece

Soooooooooooo awsome <3

Amazing, I feel like this a lot👍

awesome... that was awesome