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The Girl with the Broken Smile 2

~ My version of @georgie17xx 's amazong story. Please feel free to write your own version too! I will definetly read! ~

"Mom, I'm home." she calls. There it is again. That fake smile she smacks on her face every time she enters her front door. "Hello, sweetie. How was school?" The question that seems compulsory every evening to her irritating mother. The mother who has no idea. The mother who doesn't know but should. The mother among many others who believes the broken smile when they see it. They just can't see how she's really feeling inside. The frustration. The anger. The pain. Every single emotion she feels every single day, every single year, every single tear, every single time before she sleeps. All the time. She simply cannot ask for help. Too embarrassing and weak. But still, they can't hear the screaming inside her overpowering silence.

There she is again. The girl with the broken smile. - ME.

Alys124

@Alys124

Hi, was gone for a really long while - sorry - but I'm back now.

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Comments & Feedback (13)

I'm glad you liked the idea, this is very good :) x

@georgie17xx why thankyou!! You are my inspiration @georgie17xx ! My inspiration!

@Alys124 aw, thank you! That really means a lot x

@georgie17xx haha! Good! You deserve it!

@Alys124 thank you :') x

@Alys124 another great opuss

@justhavinfun thanks! 😊 how are you doing on your hols?!?

There good just kind of relaxin goin to horse shows that sort of stuff !!! Wbu?

@justhavinfun Nothing much really. Haven't posted on Opuss for a while thoigh because my web was down!! :) 😺

@Alys124 sorry I dunno what I just did there anyway ya u told me about what happened to ur Internet

@justhavinfun Ooohhhhh soorrryyy!!! 😜

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