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REVELATION

When I grow up
I used to say
That I couldn't wait
For that big day
When I'd be a man
Earning his pay
That was the plan
I was on my way

But had I known now
What I didn't then
I wouldn't have rushed
My boyhood's end
I'd had played awhile
A simple truth
Remained a child
Free from abuse

What did I loose?
My innocence gone
The man I'd grown
Is the man that longs
For childhood days
That I could own
Spent years away
As youth postponed

AudioPicasso

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Comments & Feedback (12)

That's really good :)

Thank you

Felt like it was resonating my life past n present.

I think we all felt this at one time or another

Raly

Really good

@maziy thank you

I can totally relate to this. :) Well written!

@AudioPicasso my heart softer, love this one. Can feel it this way.

Great stuff x

Good write, well done! 😊

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