Lock me away
Just make me stay
I won't leave this room
Outside is my doom
People that mock me
Things that block me
It's a lot to take in
I'll need more than a min
I'm scared to go out
I don't want to shout
Because people will stare
But I shouldn't even care
Yet I still do
I wish I was you
I just hate me
Is it hard to see
That I'm insecure.
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Just some naive teenage girl writing poems with no confidence... O_o Ed sheeran, the hunger games, all time low, the midnight beast and other stuff is basically my life. Ps I'm sorry I'm not good at being sociable. :)
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@Emily_InspiresAll Happy to hear, m'dear. Reminds me of Radioheads song 'Creep'. I'd wish I could repost again and again👏👏👏
@Stablish another? ahah thanks!:) 😘 and @Blueblotts aaww thanks haha it's not that good I literally wrote this in two minutes not even joking. I didn't even think about it.. :) xx
@Emily_InspiresAll I think there is no thinking involved in the best of poems. They just write themselves, lol. Merry Christmas to you😘
@Blueblotts hahah yeah I think agree with that. Too much analysing can kill the creative flow. Merry Christmas to you too!:) xx
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