Chosen Path

Great stuff very moving 😊

Not necessarily my beliefs...just a viewpoint😌

👿 Hail Satan!

Wow... Food for thought me thinks 😌

This is beautiful very meaningful, regardless of religion faith is a powerful belief. Beautiful piece.

@Fly10 Know how you feel sometimes!! ;)

@LivingDeadGirl I agree, faith is a powerful thing, and your language choice in this poem is perfect. Sometimes deep words ruin the flow, but here they work perfectly.

*by 'your, I meant Fly10

@MrAlex Thanks for comment & RP 😌😘

@naaviie Yep, guess you can see how it happens😔 Thanks for comment 😘

@Nom @LivingDeadGirl Thank you both for comments and views. I attempted to portray this from the viewpoint of someone who perhaps has negligible faith..but would like to know there was SOMETHING. Conversely, there are other examples whereby people use their beliefs to exonerate & then redeem themselves-somewhat fake. The character in this piece, I feel, is just lost😔 RP much appreciated 😌

@MrsS It's not actually based on me...but easily could have been in the past 💔😰😖👿...💘😌😄❤

@Weirdwolf Plenty about who worship the 'dark' side 😉 Glad you liked😘

@Fly10 oh I see. I interpreted it as somebody who once had faith, lost it for whatever reason and now was despairing at their lack of faith, looking for a sign that it isn't folly to have faith. However, that's the beauty of poetry; we all see things differently, and the best poetry polarises viewpoints.

Mocking me & scornfully... Love it 👍

@Nom EXACTLY. And I really appreciate your feedback-it's fascinating to know others interpretation & how the words take shape

@Nom I've lost ALL faith in the send button😠 To summarise, thank you for comment 😉😘

@Burrfoot Thanks for feedback-always good to know the parts/line that may have stood out😌😘

@Fly10 haha! And as I've said in the past, I really value your comments too.

All the best sweetie 💚

@Fly10 fantastic piece Leigh. I read it said he/she were walking a tightrope - stay on, all good. Fall... Brilliant. 👍😘

@leelee101 That was almost my thought pattern when writing...of someone finding it harder & harder to balance, with the temptation of the fall becoming overwhelming😔 Really appreciate the feedback & 😘😘 for RP too 😊

@Nom thank you for agreeing and @Fly10 thanks for your contribution it's very relatable I agree it could have related to myself in the past, I especially loved the 'mocking me' I think many who have lost faith and felt that. Thanks again for sharing.

Lovely but sad 😥 hope you are ok @Fly10

*have

@Fly10 not a problem hunny. Loved it. 👍😘

@Fly10 a spectacular write...that is so relatable to many people and for many reasons....really enjoyed reading it...here's a 🌺 for you my sweet xxx

This was really well written, I enjoyed reading this, I love your style. Can relate to parts of this also which helps. Keep up with the thought provoking writing no one does it better👍

Superb Leigh and I too am loving your style and thought provoking posts, really is a pleasure to read. 💋 (lovely new pic too hun☺)

@misslittleDHP Always enjoy receiving 🌺! Thank you for your kind comment, & v.grateful for RP. Glad you liked it 😊😘

@Stablish Always makes it worth it if someone, even if in some small way, can relate-lovely compliment😊 Much obliged for RP too😚

@smellyfingers Wonderful compliment to have from you😊 V.happy you liked it as wasn't sure about this one when I initially posted it...As ever, really appreciate RP 😘 (oh, & glad you like pic!💋)

@Odd Very grateful for RP 😊

@Irrational_Kimmi Thanks for your comment & glad you liked. All good here lady-hoping things progressing, one way or another, with you?😔😌😘

Powerful. It really evokes what I imagine a lost soul to be feeling

@Fly10 very powerfull,love it,love your work,love your new pic too 😍

@ckahn Thank you-that's the kind of image I was aiming for😌

@gazplend Thank you babe😊 Glad you're enjoying my work & v.grateful for RP-bonus that you approve of pic😉 😍😘😘

@Fly10 no problem,very aporoving😉😍😘🐦

@Fly10 shame your camera steamed up,must be cause your so hot!😍 Cheesy alert! 😃

@Fly10 so many worthy comments here, justifiably so... A thought provoking piece indeed... Not only are you clever with what you write, you also display great empathy, charm and heart... Thanks!

@zaakee Very grateful for repost😊

@Barknbite No, thank you for taking the time to read through a back post & comment so positively😊 Really appreciate you taking the time to do so😌❤

@Fly10, Wow, are you sure we aren't related? We certainly have similar writings, along with styles of writing. The really 🎧 " do do do do do🎧 the twilight zone bizarreness! Lol Love this piece!👍👍👼