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Colour Of My Thoughts

Fly10
Fly10 • 425 followers

There are days when I can't hear a sound
except my own sad story
Twisted thoughts
thrown around
in a state of constant purgatory
I had plans-still do-
searching for my own
moment of glory
Years passed & each one
clashed
with the colour of my thoughts
Mocking shadow
hard to swallow
all the lessons
I've been taught
Feel like I'm drowning
in all the small talk
and the chatter
just need someone
to catch my drift
converse with substance
and foundation
of things that matter

I'm so weary
Surrounded by these walls
Weight of life so heavy
Expectations so tall
I didn't mean to prove
I was good enough
Just to lose...

#existential-struggle #general #introspection #mental-health
Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (20)

Stablish
Stablish
May 13, 2012 at 12:48 AM

Very honest poetry, keep up the good work.😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 12:54 AM

@Stablish Thank you. Funny how you can sit down with the intention of writing something brighter, but your mind takes you somewhere else isn't it? Had an even earlier that meant mixing with people I wouldn't normally... & the inane chatter I observed formed part of this. I can see why a 'Dark' Stablish works for you!😉

Weirdwolf
Weirdwolf
May 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM

@Fly10 I can relate to that one, powerful piece, and nicely done ;)

SianRLD
SianRLD
May 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM

@Fly10 Brilliant expressive writing :)

Stablish
Stablish
May 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM

@Fly10 Yeah that always happens to me.😉 The dark Stablish profile is good. I'm starting to realise how powerful words can be, some poetry's not best for some audiences. I've got a warning for content so I feel comfortable posting it. I just love writing poetry now and didn't want to limit my self so much.😊 keep up the great stuff, I really like your poetry.😄

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 1:12 AM

@Stablish Well it's working well for you & I look forward to reading more good stuff😉😉

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 1:13 AM

@Weirdwolf Thank you-always feel you've achieved something if someone can relate 😌

ckahn
ckahn
May 13, 2012 at 1:47 AM

Nice piece. Powerful.

leelee101
leelee101
May 13, 2012 at 5:59 AM

@Fly10 well written piece, even if it's not what you set out to do! I get that all the time, I love seeing where it leads... 😘

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 7:51 AM

@ckahn Thank you😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 7:53 AM

@leelee101 Thank you & you're right-spontaneity often produces results we didn't expect. All those thoughts lurking in the grey matter...😉

leelee101
leelee101
May 13, 2012 at 7:56 AM

@Fly10 pick one, and let it run, that's what I say! 😊

SianRLD
SianRLD
May 13, 2012 at 8:01 AM

@leelee101 Agreed! Although only thought at moment is breakfast, so I may delay for something more inspirational once my morning fix is satisfied..

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 8:03 AM

@SianRLD I had breakfast an hour ago & inspiration not yet in full flow. Maybe more coffee....😉

leelee101
leelee101
May 13, 2012 at 8:04 AM

@SianRLD @Fly10 however it comes... 😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 13, 2012 at 8:06 AM

@leelee101 I'm gonna run with that one & pick random thoughts throughout day. At a hockey tournament all day, so who knows what'll come from that😉

SianRLD
SianRLD
May 13, 2012 at 8:09 AM

@Fly10 :)

ZuperZed
ZuperZed
May 17, 2012 at 5:20 PM

Dark and somewhat sad but very good! Like it! :)

Fly10
Fly10
May 17, 2012 at 7:01 PM

@ZuperZed Glad you liked it & thanks for feedback😊

ZuperZed
ZuperZed
May 17, 2012 at 7:11 PM

@Fly10 Well, not much of a feedback. I'm no expert either but I know what I like. Specially opusses I can relate to :)

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