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"She was so very beautiful."
He said sincerely and unfazed,
by my nondescript reply and my uninterested gaze..

"And she was such a talent-could turn her hand to anything"
(whilst pondering my 'lack of' I'll admit, that one did sting..)

"My parents were bowled over, the first time that they met..."
This swiftly was becoming, a night I would regret...

"Her smile lit up a room..'
(he dreamily still rambles)
'...not a man who didn't swoon"
My fake smile, is now a shambles..

"And her quirky sense of humour-oh how she made me laugh!"
Not noticing me doodling a
'Her Vs Me' pie chart and graph
on my serviette
As he continues,
to describe this perfect creature
The result of my studies are in-
And prove, I really can't compete here.

So I stand and say politely
(and he appears somewhat perplexed)
"See you around, and thanks for dinner-
It's just a shame you brought your ex".

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Fantastic. What a clever write Leigh. Love the his turn/my turn and the pie chart? Excellent. Love it! 👏👍😘❤

Had fun with this one😉😄 Based on conversation with a friend who'd been on a date, & the guy talked about his ex throughout! Bit of a rebound job I suspect😖 Glad you liked it & thanks for comments-wasn't sure if the her/him theme would work, so pleased you approve. And a big 😘 for RP x

Lol

@Odd Thanks for RP 😌😘

Lmfao this is genius Leigh 👏👏💋

@smellyfingers Thank you Richard (if I'm allowed to call you that?! Smelly just doesn't seem right😄) As always, RP much appreciated😘😘

Brilliant hon. Absolutely love it 😘😘😘

Very clever. The last line was superb 😍

@DaddyDooDahs @jojo72 Thank you both for comments-really glad you enjoyed it😊😘

@Fly10 you can call me anything you want too Leigh ☺Mwah x

@smellyfingers R it is then 😌 My comment re same wavelength, related to my earlier post 'Just For Now'...I think you'll get it 😔😌💋

This is very clever, nice to see a humorous poem from you!

Just brilliant as always my sweet❤❤🌹🌹

@misslittleDHP Aww, thank you lady😘 Huge hug for RP too ❤

@Nom Ha! Thank you😘 Strange isn't it, as I'm generally a REALLY happy person. Just seems that trials, tribulations, heartbreak & woe, seem to flow so easily from the pen! 😉😌

@Fly10 it's true, it's far easier to write a sad tale...

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